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Distant Footsteps

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Sometimes our most recent lessons reach back the furthest.

Sunday, August 29, 2021


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Distant Footsteps

How present
This past
Called memory

Hollow sole dragging
Hobnail boots
Caked with crud
Mud
And oil
Atop the landing
"Drop them greasy clothes"
Came the sometimes loving voice
The sometimes malevolent voice
But always his wife's warning
My mother's caring way

So many years past
When linoleum's impoverished sound
Is so remembered
Stepping from stove to table
Her laboring hands
Hefting the pressure cooker
Laden with steam softened cracked wheat
Barely eatable
That day's nourishment
Weighing upon
Forever toiling legs
Cushioned by sheepskin slippers
Whispering their shuffled prayer
I care

Generously ladled
Chew-your-brain-loose grains
Fit for health
Unfit for a kid
Layered my stomach
Fortified my heart
Prepped me abler
To gather reverie
So dear

Then

There was the sound
So ethereal
Heavenly I was told
Of bare feet
Curling the once-a-day-vacuumed
Pride and joy carpet of sage green wool
Replacing recently vanquished
Throw rug jigsaw mess
My early youth played upon
Our palace place
The living room

Scrunching pleasures
Toes lapping up that carpet
Dad's feet
Awful specimens
Calloused of years hard labor
Mother's feet
Preserved with nightly hot water soaks
Epson salts
When we could afford it
Worthy of pedicure
Never afforded

Me

Always wore my socks
Heavy wool
Darned when worn spots
Yelled loud enough
Mixed colors
When necessary
Yet always comfy
Homey
Loving covers
For footsteps
Unaware of the journey ahead
When steps would have to become strides
Leaps
Bounds
And eventually
Idleness

So present
These footfalls of then
Becoming echoes
Foreshadowing paces to come
When a once stubborn child
Needed to listen carefully
Or miss the lessons
Still offered today
From distant footsteps
Passing near by


 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 31, 2021
Many images here. And all very easy to relate to. I've often wondered how much of what I remember is precise. And another thing, it's amazing too how memories can warm you right up, but they also can tear you apart. The sound of footsteps passing by was perfect. Peace....r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 30, 2021
Such details in those footsteps of the past. Well trod down memory lane.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 30, 2021
You listened to the footfalls well. That thrill of victory and the stink of defeat (I digressed).

While soft carpeting awaited my senior year in high school, I was always well socked with matching pair and shoes to go here and there along with rubbers to protect them in the ravages of ice and snow.

Fortunately, I didn't have the digest steamed cracked wheat. Mom was a good cook of fresh from the field food. We ate oatmeal, malt-o-meal, and nutrition-less cream of wheat.

Ron


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