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Dawn Evermore Rising

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Everyone has a favorite time of the day. For some of us, it lasts for hours, even its memory revisited from time to time. (Some of you may have read this some time ago, but today was so gloomy here in Oregon, I just had to re-post.)

Friday, November 19, 2021


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Dawn Evermore Rising

It starts

Street lights fade
their tiny soft-winged tenants flee
checkerboard facades change
last night's illumined squares now dark
become but yesterday's portals
some polished
some weather streaked
all reaching to reflect first breath

Steam ascends from the city's vacuum
gratings rattle with subterranean yawning
people-movers wind their way
through mazes of starts
stops

Topside tracks
like fixed contrails
glisten with frost
not yet enjoined by speeding transit
their skeletal tributaries
readying the trickle of humanity
into a mass ocean of glass and steel survival

Uptown
Downtown

A street sweeper's tire rubber and swirling brushes
beneath the overalled believer in Lottos
holding firm the wheel and gears of faith
of trust
gathering gutter-lodged disposal
glass and plastic
paper and cardboard
spinning into the vortex
lifting yesterday's careless cast-offs
inviting today's Starbuck anew
reflections of another kind

Leashes strain from anxious sniffing
bladders hold
ready to burst
seeking just the right tree
the right hydrant
the "ah, yes" that only a canine can know

Rays of sun begin spilling down alleyways
the long-tail rodents scamper for cover
their bellies full
seeking safety after a long night of ancient ritual
food of anything
digestion of history
all in a night's work

Suddenly

Full light cascades down avenues and streets
itinerant pigeons and seagulls spread habitual wings
ready to adore the steadies
the loners
park walkers
window ledge dependables
homeless with dance cards of crumbs
envying the moneyed insomniacs throwing chunks
baguettes gone stale
fit for few
a feast for many
senses loving the coos and warbles
the bobbing thank you
the reciprocal bonding
few but the lonely can appreciate

Finally

The steel and glass imitation of nature
comes fully alive
a sun's illumination without reserve
energy's provision for another day

Rich mix with the poor
money exchanges hands
the hotdog vendor
the hedge fund taker
the cookie jar provider

Most become tomorrow's yesterday
knowing little of the other light
requiring no rising or setting
illumination that never grows dim
something as nothing
forever light
never of darkness

Such for some
awakens from a New York sunrise
this dichotomy like no other
forever reminding
our eyes of dawn
one's inner light
is forever rising

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 20, 2021
Wow! Odin... This is my favorite of yours I’ve read since returning to the Den. It is brimming and alive! As I was reading, I thought “This doesn’t sound like anything in Oregon,” I live in Western Washington, in the same ‘dark’ days as you wrote of here in the PNW. Not until later in the piece did I learn this was NY. But jeez this is a great piece of writing! It was like I had one of those scouting, high-powered binoculars panning details of the trek ahead, or the Hubble telescope, counting moon craters and recent unfortunate Russian space debris. And the language unfolds gracefully, unwraps the surprise in gradual increments. The moth wings, windows being yesterday’s portals, the “mass ocean of glass and steel” — the dogs reading their peemail. I can hear the pigeons and smell the hot dogs! The flourish at the end….so uplifting. Like an intricate and expansive mural of words. Absolutely excellent! **** ~~ djl


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