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Parental Sun and Clouds

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Perceptions of sun and cloud essence.

Saturday, December 18, 2021


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Parental Sun and Clouds

 


How matriarchal the sun,
Patriarchal the clouds,
Parenting as they do
Nature’s many needs.

Always on call,
Like a healer-team
Mixing the elixir of life,
Readying proper times,
Fulfilling duty’s myriad demands.

At times…

Humans curse this seeming abject conflict,
The partnership’s chameleon essence,
Forgetting Nature’s free will is just that,
A dichotomy of purpose—reality’s
Idiosyncratic singularity.

Sun and clouds,
Nomads of the natural process,
Facing each other
Often on battlefronts.

Yet—

Like any natural instinct
Sun’s raging fire,
Forever giving needed light and heat,
Knows earth’s rotation
Carrying its water worlds
Of spent frigidity
Must let rise its evaporate escape,
Obeying Nature’s request,
Feeding the ever-hungry atmosphere,
Satiating clouds’ appetite.

Thus

Clouds attempt caution with their magic,
This ability to cool and nurture
Results of the often-blistering sun.

Earth’s open heart enfolds the saturation
Atop the soil,
Splashing skyward,
Drenching all huddled close.
Man,
Flower,
Tree,
Animal,
Especially life’s unloved weeds,
Never ignored of rain’s compassion.


Yet,

In some lands,
Clouds’ appetite becomes voracious,
Rendering hurricanes,
Typhoons,
Tornadoes,
And floods,
Bringing clouds’ frequent mania contrite,
Reminding all that what seems destructive,
Might be Nature’s passionate lament for forgiveness.

Could there be
Undefined ardor felt by sun and clouds,

This marriage without documents,
This relationship of warmth and often uncontrolled weeping,
This tireless beginning without end,
This companionship of zero judgment,
Knowing only acceptance of one another’s reality?

Still…


Despite the yin-yang
Of luminance and shade,
Sun’s heat cannot skip over
The suffocating sands of deserts,
Or aberrant dust bowls of wind-ravaged drought.

Nor can the clouds
Always guarantee peaceful visits,
Given wind’s capricious persuasion,
That sometimes-friendly cousin,
Sometimes-angry uncle.

Yes

As all modes of cause and effect know,
Maintaining an existence of harmony
Is fraught with chance and timing.

But without sun and clouds,
Nature’s ever-volatile liaison of passion and duty,
The planet’s existence would merely be
The zero sum of naught,
A vacuum of nothingness,

An orphan of parentless Nature.



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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 18, 2021
Never doubt the possibilities of poetry when controlled by the hand
and mind of a master! This is a sensational tour, sprinkled with doubt and awe, and pulled together brilliantly in the final stanza. Bravo!

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 18, 2021
After reading this one, there was a feeling of harmony for me. You created a tethering of nature to life forms, given that we are as much manifested Universal Energy as the weather itself. Marvelous line “This relationship of warmth and often uncontrolled weeping,”. The three final lines leave off with the magnitude of how ‘everything’ even the weather, as part of nature, is. ~ ~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 18, 2021
The universe is a very violent place. Our sun throughout its ages during its estimated 8 billion year lifespan, can and has done great violence to the earth and everything on it. But here we are in our multitude of life and luxury, thriving in millions of fauna and flora, yet isolated by weather and harshness of land. Your poem reflects all of this so well. Right down to the "compassion of the rain for the weeds." But those weeds are tough little buggers that often reject their demise under drought and human violent destruction. Hence their survival from weed killers so far.

In the contrast of sunlight and shade provided by clouds make all the difference when it comes to protecting life from too much of a good thing.

Kudos for this one!

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 18, 2021
It really is amazing how interconnected all of nature is, but especially based on sun and cloud (rain). The implicit "balance" coming from the "big picture" that we live within is critical and in the end blessed by forces far beyond our range. Very interesting poem.


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