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Apathetic Living

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The holidays are a grim reminder of behavior that pretends not to see the need to care about those who desperately need caring about. What is it that triggers the inability to care, accept accountability, and realize what they do, or don’t do, for others, is counter- intuitive to how we are wired? (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, December 26, 2021


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Apathetic Living

 

How honest the dog’s wag of tail.

How dishonest a liar’s mask of regret.

How relevant Man’s cause.

How irrelevant Man’s excuse.

 

Even as…

 

Success usually comes from failure,

People try,

Masquerade,

Behave without conscience,

Speak falsities,

Lie,

Cheat,

Fail,

And destroy one’s naked inner being.

 

How simple it seems…

 

Allowing bad judgment

To eat away discernment,

Suffocate compassion,

Shackle the heart and mind’s generosity,

Relegating sound decisions

To the procrastination hideaway,

That small stealth-like cavern of the spirit

Where the tail wags the dog

And darkness shields the epiphanous

Illumination of enlightenment.

 

How insentient

This living the apathetic life.

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 27, 2021
First, that art image is magnificent. It sets the tone for your zenith concept here in these lines, particularly the line with “..naked inner being,” and its pointer to us humans having intelligence, having spirit of the tail-wagging dog, and in that same line, the word ‘destroy’ . . .coming from the vagaries of not-caring. This portrayal of inherent good being suffocated {or allowed to drown} from no offer of life ring is effective in illustrating the human downfall we are witnessing. Very descriptive phrase, “…eat away at discernment,” in supporting your points of darkness — the lies, the shackling of generosity, obstructing illumination. “How simple it seems….” ~~ djl

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 27, 2021
You have struck a cord that resonates in this poem of those who could care less about others. In doing nothing, they do so much damage. A poignant reminder.

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2021
enjoyed this piece tremendously. i guess the worlds most compassionate that carry mantles of mercy have greater depths from their own past pain. i thank God for all my past


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