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Dancing With Love's Oasis

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Can it not be said that being in love with another person, i.e., being in the state of love with another person is a battle at times against many a fool’s paradise?

Monday, September 26, 2022


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Dancing With Love’s Oasis

 

How enigmatic this enticement called love

This often-mistaken mirage of chance.

 

Why must the impassioned hope of youth,

An oasis one seeks repeatedly,

Believe there is reward at the end of infatuation?

 

Such is the oasis-like quenching of desperation.

 

Might trusting one’s dry and labor-intensive trek

Ultimately provide comfort for the world-weariness of hope?

 

Even as the young, getting old, trudge forward,

Believing there is affection in aging’s essence.

They often find sure footing is betrayed by the quicksand of deceit,

Suffocating the confidence of intelligence once breathing freely.

 

Such a mystifying effort,

This mirage of youthful fantasies,

This thirst for tangibility,

The virus of one’s aging oasis.

 

Yet…

 

To dance with love’s oasis

Is to survive alongside time’s ageless hope,

Provide satiation of purpose,

Moisten the lips to speak gratitude,

Afford balm to sooth the pangs of disappointed love.

 

And, oh, the reward of tenacity,

The freedom to whirl with love’s ceaseless flow,

Even as passion may dizzily induce stumbling backwards

As we grapple to atone for past mistakes.



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 27, 2022
No doubt, the concept of love is a complicated and difficult emotion that takes years of experience, but inside and outside of love, to come to terms with it. Poets too have wrestled with the concept, as you have adeptly done here, to try to fathom its many shades. May we continue to do so, in search of the key that unlocks true love.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 27, 2022
The time between love is indeed, a desert. But when we find love, we feel like we are at an oasis. But one cannot take an oasis for granted if the love that creates it runs dry. The only solution that I could give would be to be very frugal with that love and not let it dry up but keep replenishing with new experience so that love flows on and on.

But as we age, love needs to become wise as well. Sometimes, comfort is more love than hot ecstasy, something we dream about but no longer have.

As you can see, your poem generated many thoughts about the tenacity of one's seeking love.

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on September 26, 2022
as they say, agape would prevail in the end for the whole mankind, but having romantic love on the side won't hurt. lovely read as always, Odin, always been fascinated with your perspective. thank you.


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