Breath’s Final Neat Package
Click
Waxy paper
cartooned respite
chewy pink
bubbles small
messes big
“don't you be blowin' them
your brows be shaved
daunted mother”
silly child
Click
Driver's license
double feature drive-in
windows open
friends in next car
cuddle up seats
brown bagged cherries
stems to pull
pits to suck clean
stomach aches ignored
paper peeled straws
blowgun ammo
shot between cars
shoring up boredom
while girlfriend gazes
Jimmy Dean's red jacket
up there four stories tall
Click
Makin' it on my own
lonely brownstone
Central Park always dark
letters few
bill collectors many
pay or else
notice this
notice that
Oops
the draft is nice
they say
three squares a day
see the world
'til you don't
Dark storms
rain down shrapnel
brain entangled
sunrise runs
nature hides
evil's time
Click
Smiles
smiles
door to door
vacuum cleaners rule
used car
crazy wife
crazier life
now that's a neat package
'til it's not
Click
Jack is good
Smirnoff bad
mirrors in front
noise in back
cacophonous peanut shells below
orchestrating stubby pencil
upon napkins write
verse or prose
doesn't matter
re-wrapping
neat packages those 'til
'til glad hand extends
binds me in different wrappings
novel’s dust jacket shines
mail box stays empty
dust jackets fade
Click
Someday
an old shep will appear
dropping neat packages
for me to bag and seal
while we walk the walk
bark the talk
shuffle left
shuffle right
finding straight ahead
Click
Breath's final neat package
patiently waits to be wrapped
but until then
Click
I felt every stage of this flick through the memoires. Every 'click' resonated in my mind and produced snapshots of my own in an instant.
Compelling as always Rx
I guess that's why they have dust jackets for novels sitting on shelves just gathering dust.
Ron