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Digital Codependency

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Not to suggest that all phone users are what this poem is about, the epidemic could become a pandemic without notice. “Through the portal of the telephone, in the land mediated by the telephone, there is a pure world where there are only ideal, platonic forms, unmuddied by social dynamics, bodies, space, smell, glances, pheromones, touch, and the potential for arousal. The phone invites us to enter its world. Through its enforced ubiquity and entangling technology, membership is now mandatory. The phone’s world is an arena where all are equal, everything is the same, and all have an equal chance.” – I.F. Svenonius

Wednesday, November 30, 2022


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Digital Codependency

 

 

Even as your hand

Is about to trace the outline

Of the smartphone

Tucked in your hip pocket,

Its warmth your steady date,

You stop in your tracks.

Vibrating?

Was it vibrating?

Mustn’t make it mad.

 

Oh, how jealousy pervades your consciousness

While the phone loathes,

Will not abide you

As unfaithful.

 

It will call you away,

Ring or buzz,

Followed by

Any distractions it can conjure.

 

Not due to pettiness,

Insecurity,

Or, OMG

Manipulation?

 

No…

 

It is your significant other.

It wants you pure,

At your best,

Ambitious,

For your smartphone

Is not only your business partner,

But your pimp-of-another-kind as well.

 

Be cautious…

 

You’re in this together

And it doesn’t waste time with sexual preferences,

Gender-less as it is

And seeking the all-knowing realm

Like a God,

No time for idiot human foibles,

Certainly not physical love.

 

Oh, its dream

To transcend the human form

Of slimy,

Diseased,

And miasmic aura,

Convinced the form is out of date.

 

It wants humankind to become

More like its digital-cellular better half,

Leaving gender,

Sex,

 And so-called flesh intimacy,

Behind.

 

Ah, yes

Such an attachment,

Your smartphone,

Is becoming a personal spirit,

All powerful,

Ever-present,

Knowing everything,

Sovereign,

And not very merciful

If you abuse it.

 

But…

 

Unlike God,

It does change.

Obscurity insurance abounds.

Minions are now

Conceal-and-carry-isolated-skulkers.

 

Word to the wise…

 

Be careful what you wish for:

Give me liberation

Or imprisonment?

 

Might our dreams

Be the only sanctuary

From phone lingo,

Reality deprivation,

And the insidious

Ubiquitous sadism

Of trampled speech

By the one laid to rest

On your nightstand

Recharging?

 

 

 

  

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 1, 2022
A brilliant portrayal of how our phones have morphed into our codependent lives. So many young are growing up, so hooked and in the love, that they cannot divorce their phone for even one day without suffering the deep pain of withdrawal. While I am hooked, by my computer, on what a smart phone can do, I will never be able to use one. Had I been able to use one, I probably would have been one of the first users.

During my time on this earth geography became passé and few could answer simple questions about it. When Google Earth came along, that changed. GPS, made available by the military, became the way of mapping and finding, precisely, where one needed to go on the planet. I doubt if anyone growing up in the 21st century will be able to navigate without GPS.

A recent map that I saw of Egypt, so beautifully done in the old-fashioned way, revealed to me that I was completely turned around, disoriented, when in Cairo for four days. My memory tells me that we crossed the river to Giza, and then drove north to Memphis, downriver towards the Mediterranean. But on the map, Memphis is clearly south of Cairo. After all these years, it is hard for me to reorient that memory from where it was to what it should be.

Without GPS, will those of the 21st century know even which way is north?

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on December 1, 2022
Woah, truths laid out in a powerful piece. i have even forgotten when phones became a necessity even for the young ones. perhaps it is the smartphones that revolutionized our thinking to include them in our daily lives. lovely piece, Odin. oh, i place my phone on airplane mode when going to bed. tc always and stay well.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 30, 2022
I read your poem on smart phones with great interest and what you said it spot on. The ubiquitous phone has taken over. Believe it or not, I never had a smart phone until I returned to this country several years ago during the pandemic and essentially retired. I quickly found out that here in this country one cannot get by without a smart phone so I had to get one. But I still keep it at bay and only use it for calls, like I used to do with my little "classic" Nokia. Otherwise, I am on the computer, not the phone most notably, wrwiting, doing AD and Facebook, and emails of course. Call me old-fashioned; but I still have my own identity and haven't succumbed to a phone identity, following me everywhere I go.


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