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Agony Challenging Forgiveness

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Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it. – Mark Twain

Tuesday, December 6, 2022


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Agony Challenging Forgiveness

 

So short is the fuse

Of disturbed cerebrate IEDs,

Wrongs whose means of igniting

Are very long,

Maybe years.

 

Commitment deserves to know,

For the mutual oath knows well

To embrace provocation’s truth.

 

Disturbances enter the trust,

Asking but for admittance,

Challenging love’s ability to right any wrong,

Knowing guilt as arbiter can ignite or extinguish

The agony challenging forgiveness.

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on December 8, 2022
rightly said, Odin, truly an agony.
it was Blake who said, in hell all are self justified and there is only forgetfulness in heaven.

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on December 6, 2022
I don't think I understand it. It seems very ambiguous. And the feeling I get from it is almost what I gather learned helplesness feels like and it's very disturbing. I know it might not seem like it but I really think you've done well with this one. I'll be coming back to read it many more times.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 6, 2022
All I can gather from reading, is that when it is time to let go, one should just let go. Not continueing agonizing over it. Just make it what it is, history.

Ron


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