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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Forever Awake

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Disappointments are part of living, but some withstanding time, remain continually steadfast and often become sorrow in need of healing.

Tuesday, May 2, 2023


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Forever Awake

 

Flowers gasping for care
are flowers that remain without light,
smothered within a rainbow plastic wrap,
as if suffocation was their destiny.

Petals now lay languid atop a kitchen table
begging to be caressed,
to be touched for remembrance,
to feel the deep breath that lifts their fragrance,
a bouquet remaining robbed of life,
given but received by no one,
snapshot never taken,
a never-happened night
forever awake.



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Reviewed on May 3, 2023
Oh, Odin! The vision and feelings I see and feel carry such a melancholy message. Better days are ahead!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 3, 2023
He stood in the storm alone, feeling it, a flood of thoughts at times whelming him, but when he realized that the winds were not destroying him, he adjusted his sails for the next phase of the journey. I've learned to always keep love and thankfulness alive in my heart. Watering dead flowers will never bring them back to life. Peace.... r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 3, 2023
There is nothing worse than a heartfelt gift thrown away or ignored. All flowers fade, but when ignored as a precious gift of color and scent, it is such a waste of emotion lost.

Ron


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