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Truncated Wail of Joy

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

So often, a relief of pain and the subsequent elation with a return to peace can show itself in quiet and humble thanks… especially so after the ending of an intimate relationship.

Friday, May 5, 2023


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Truncated Wail of Joy

 

How timid a man’s emotions can be

This rejoicing of tenacity

As it quietly releases its sigh

Through a welcoming rictus

Knowing one’s outward revealing of thanks

Will be gradual

 

How serious his little animal friend

Peered through cage wires of home

Noting the man’s change of mood

Acknowledging with a blink and a flick of the tail

A seldom-seen action

From his little chinchilla companion

 

Having shared the closure

Of a sorrowful human relationship

Where trust and security had eroded

The soft fur and gentle paws

Of the rodent supreme

Beneath the man’s fingers,

Shared this mild,

Yet poignant moment of gladness,

As the lengthy year of a relationship’s pain and sorrow

Had come to an end.

 

With a scratch under his soft chin,

The heartfelt “thank you” to Destiny’s comforting pal,

Was acknowledged with a flick of his tail.

 

As the man made his nightly goodnight

It was like the finishing of a long and wearying book,

But an experience that had delivered lessons

And a touch more of wisdom.

 

Good night, Barron

Tomorrow’s going to be a great day.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on May 10, 2023
Tenderness. It’s been a year……. “….finishing of a long and wearying book”. I like that definition of this state of being. Such a gentle piece of writing that contains appreciation for the continuance. I had to look up rictus. Those last two lines were chin-lifting to be sure. Thank you for sharing this one. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 5, 2023
"Where trust and security had eroded" I can relate. I've been through this several times. Perhaps why human nature is one of the muses I employ so often as a writer. A touching write. I sense healing here. May there be many more great days ahead. Peace.... r


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