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The Face as Memoir

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

How best might we wake up and reflect on the often hidden lessons we’ve experienced? Native Americans shelter much of their experience under their weathered skin, having endured pain and sorrow others of us will never know or understand.

Monday, June 26, 2023


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The Face as Memoir


How often we ponder
The portrait of life
Some without a face
Some with but war as a canvas

Such a face

Reveals folds above eyes
Disengaged as a draught-laden wilderness
Yet reliable as an infrequent desert storm

For amidst nature’s wisdom
Directional signs are forever available
Even though some may be
Subtle and wanting to hide
Still
Few pay attention

Perfection makes no judgment

History is difficult to cover up
When presented by a face
That has obviously seen
More than most of us
Can dream of

Archiving such potential realities
Begs the opening of discovery
Often challenging one’s patience
The forever-our-partner in waiting
Smiling back sagacity so anxious
Wanting only to be part of our own smile

The face

What was
What is
What might attract
Veracious seekers of life
Accepting their journey
As the worth of engaging years
Infused with honesty
Allowing chiseled sculpture
To live forever in the eye’s mind
Of those who might also
Wish to perceive beyond the face

Projecting the wonder
Life
Peace
Waiting for the next iteration
Remains a journal of the spirit
Some will fortunately
Embrace with understanding
Knowing weathered skin
Is but captured wind and weather
Mind and soul
Body and suffering
Wanting only to remain
Without airbrush deceit
As is
As was
As will always be

While others

Will address
One’s life map of travels
With fearful retreat
Wanting still the shadows of delusion


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 27, 2023
With this piece, you have delved deeply into how our face can reflect our lives. While I haven't done any research into the subject, my observation is that heredity plays a major role with the way we look as we age.

Native Americans spend most of their lives out in the elements of wind and sun. And many smoke pipe or cigarettes, even the women, every day. The loss of teeth affects the way the lower jaw looks.

I recall a great aunt of mine. Early pictures of her in her young married life showed her to be a rather homely woman. But when she saw her 11-year-old daughter get hit by a car coming around her school bus from the window of their house, her hair turned immediately white and white hair made her very attractive. She stayed beautiful, with many men after her after her husband died, she told me. Beautiful well into her 90s when she died. The 11-year-old daughter, Linda, was in a coma for five weeks, had a broken hip and pelvis that never quite healed properly and suffered the effects of brain damage while being a secretary for an insurance company.

I don't know how Linda looks today, at about 75, but she is in a very old and established nursing home with her older sister. Another sister, all of them very beautiful, just died and is not buried yet. Those two older sisters gave me goosebumps when we went to visit when they were in high school.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 26, 2023
Quite an image. Wow! It's amazing what can happen to the skin. What is construed as beautiful in modern society is certainly at great odds with reality. Every face will change, some in grace and some not, and every strong body lessens, sometimes remarkably so, but every beautiful soul remains beautiful. The heart has no wrinkles. An interesting and poignant insight. r


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