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A Poem's Conception

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are times when the premise for a poem is but one word, birth. (painting by Syd)

Saturday, July 29, 2023


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A Poem’s Conception

 

Like the beginning of a birth

The swarm of squirming words

opt for position

Knowing a one-word attachment

Creates the beginning,

Just as our human conception

Embraces the task of purpose

In seeking purchase.

 

The moment has arrived

 

Where lexiconic imagination through

Left-hemispheric order and control

Enjoins Right’s sphere of creativity

As a new addition begins its gestation

Into the population of words.

 

Patience rules identity’s progression

As attributes develop into essence,

Accompanied by sub-text of intention

Layering each accumulative sentence

Into stanzas of growth,

A time-dependent progressional experience

Where maternal and fraternal aspects of behavior

Start the poem’s journey of influence

To become generational contribution

Into the intellectual and emotional consideration

Of all that is

And all which may possibly become.

 

Oh, the resplendent reward

Of those initial moments of birth’s acknowledgment

The acceptance by a polyglot readership

Allowing a sensorial reaction

To influence their growth and understanding.

 

For…

 

A poem’s parental influence

Rests in the hearts and minds

Of strangers,

Acquaintances,

As well as family,

Even as the early moments of delivery

Subject the eyes that peer upon this new creation

With blinks of comprehension and self-evaluation

One may not have expected.

 

Might there also be before them,

Still wrapped in the poet’s swaddling comfort

Of love,

Commitment,

And purpose,

A heretofore unrealized insight?

 

 



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Reviewed on July 29, 2023
Sweet gestational joinings merely dormant but there and are eager to show themselves! Yes, Odin!! This is the way it is!! 'Love this!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 29, 2023
The last stanza's question is the point of the whole exercise. I guess that's why we write poetry at all. So many ways to trigger a poem and carry it out.

I guess any poet would be honored to know that their concept presented in the poem would become part of new insight, a phrase or stanza oft quoted and given credit to the poet or the poem reprinted where millions may see and understand it.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 29, 2023
Many of my poems begin with a phrase that quickly morphs into the first line. But often, many of my poems have begun with a single word, as you suggest here, often enough for me to think about publishing a collection of single title poems that take a single word, compassion for example, and write an entire poem around the concept.

I take exception to Richard's comment about a poem never being finished. While that may be true, I don't like to tinker with poems that I wrote "back when". The poem has had its moment in creative time, and apart from perhaps cleaning up bits and pieces of errors or individual word choice, I never change earlier poems. For all intents and purposes, they are finished. Heck, I go back a few years and see titles in my files that I forgot I had written and reread them "as if for the first time", wondering what I had written.

As Richard said, your poem is thought-provoking.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 29, 2023
Indeed - the one word, or the one thought that the very first word of a poem attaches itself too and grows from. Then there's the notion of a poem being like a child that the writer/parent nurtures to some kind of maturity. Then there's what I think: that a poem is never really done. You can always go back and make it better. I shared this idea with you many years ago. It seems appropriate again in this particular context. Words are things, and a small drop of ink falling like dew upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions, think. Yours is an inquisitive mind still, Odinsan, and your poetry encourages thought. Well done. r


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