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Tinsel Webs Becoming

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some of our important lessons derived from the lesser creatures go unattended until… (Image by Jobson)

Saturday, August 5, 2023


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Tinsel Webs Becoming


Twisted desires spin endlessly,
Neither destination or affixing important.
Like a mountain of miscreant spiders
Struck immobile by anomalous gluttony
They neither advance or retreat.

Such is our species’ go-to mindset,
Where ravenous cravings blind
Eye and mind alike,
Making feel-good choice
But the reckless flinging of tinsel threads,
Foolishly trusting anchor will be found.

Such folly not even the meager spider would trust,
For it knows that direction,
Structure,
Symmetry,
And connecting,
Has always been necessary for survival.

One might do well to gaze upon the patient arachnid,
Where lessons learned many centuries past
Continue to serve both shelter and nourishment well,

Thriving on its eight-legged-three-hundred-million-year-old wisdom

And having observed man’s covetous tinsel-spangled weaving,

Finds solace a webbed coexistence with Nature,

As centuries pass patiently by,

Humankind awaits The glitters’ loss and collapse

As it becomes tomorrow’s dust,
Taking up reserved space beneath yesterday’s other vanished species,

All while Nature continues its residence here on earth

And its cyclical pursuit of survival.




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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 6, 2023
I love you describing webs as tinsel for this one of your many imaginative titles.

Your prosetry, I believe, is examining the web that we all are connected to. In some ways resulting in repetitive destructive behavior in other ways distancing ourselves from the natural world that is our underpinning. The spiders have value as we destroy their webs for their food going about our business that mostly is just busyness.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on August 5, 2023
Your piece here shows how ‘greater’ are those lesser species. The sage lines here are pointedly delivered, but what lights up off the page is the line: “Thriving on its eight-legged-three-hundred-million-year-old wisdom”. . . and I might never look at a spider from anywhere but that line, Odin. The tinsel becoming tomorrow’s dust is plenty good, too. I love the line, “Such folly not even the meager spider would trust,” That puts the kabash on superiority of human intelligence pretty well. Thank you, djl


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