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Fading is...

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A prosetry remembrance of daily visits made to my parents’ nursing home. Among the many images remains one which says much of a particular one’s final days.

Friday, September 8, 2023


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Fading is…


A table,
a darkened TV monitor,
a trusted friend of late
staring back at the old man's face
propped up by withered hands
supporting his fading semblance.

Fading is…

Time's map now sallow of spent harvest.
awaits tomorrow with swollen tributaries,
purple veins spidering across a leathery landscape
once of vibrant color,
now but survival in raised relief,
remnants of a once mountainous climb,
now simply time's sand awaiting
the next dune to take shape.

Fading is…

The mirror of one's lifetime of grist,
the roots of age separating,
one's capillaries emerged,
a corroded shield once handsome,
now a decaying canvas
stretched tight over facial bones protruding,
sunken erosion of yesterdays' tenacity.

Fading is…

Lucidity waning
as the lost look of wishing
struggles with how it feels
to merely gaze at a glass reflection
visiting one’s tenuous imagination.
“After all,” he says,
“It was just the other day
when I heard the Charleston
drifting around in the dark.
Remember that Helen?
Remember?”

“Dad,” his son says,
“Mom's not here anymore.”

He lowers his head onto the desk
as his smile holds.
“Helen darling,
you danced the Charleston for me.
Don't you remember?”

The mist of sadness seeps beneath his eyelids.
“It's okay sweetheart,” he says.
“It's just your dimming memory.”

Carefully tucking these moments back into his own remembrance,
the son places a pillow under his father’s head.

Fadeless is the patience continuing for both
during finality’s passing days.



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Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on September 9, 2023
Beautifully written! I can see the love your parents had for eachother between the lines and also the love you held for them.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
Your prosetry recently has been covering aging and the inevitable more and more but you told me yourself you still have many more years to go. That said, I commend you for dutifully visiting your parents as they waned in life. I saw my father only once with so many others I didn't get a chance to talk with him three months before and hadn't seen my mother for 9 years and only spoke with her on her TTY 2 years before she was gone.

But I have to commend you as well for this very realistic and poignant description of how everything fades from view, even when thought to still be there. I often visited my elderly relatives in their homes and nursing homes. They seemed to have less to tell me as they aged. Even their memories faded. Except my mother. Her memories remained strong until 95.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
A sensitive and emotionally charged piece. Would make a good film short. It's good to keep pressing forward eagerly and with hope. You can't start the next chapter in your life if you keep rereading the last one. If it's true what they say about our lives flashing before us in those last moments, hopefully what we see will be all the good things we did, and not all the other stuff. Enjoyed this. r

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
Visceral description of a burgeoning reality that only those who have seen with their own eyes can completely identify with here. This made me feel more delicate and fragile myself just reading it. Also, it contains the ache of caring about those spidery hands and aloof eyes. My favorite lines are: “now but survival in raised relief” and “as the lost look of wishing”. Naturally this brought me to the moment my mother, in her Alzheimer paradigm, tried breaking my finger as I held her hand, and I knew she thought she was back at the Olive Garden Restaurant with its marvelous bread sticks. More the breaking was my heart, not my finger. Thank you, Odin. Your writing seeps off the page with its compassion. ~~ djl


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