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Untethered Freedom

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A great loss of connection can be devastating or eventually liberating. “To be or not to be,” will always remain the deciding question of survival, for finding peace and happiness relies solely on one’s willingness to be his or her authentic self. (Painting by Rare Gallery)

Thursday, September 14, 2023


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Untethered Freedom

Afloat and no island in sight.

How sublime this detachment,
taking us where our innate sense of direction needs to go,
sometimes into a dream-like cove of illusional calm
anchoring firm for a momentary Dodger Dog with onions,
easy on the mustard,
a grandstand ice cream sundae,
a bag of nerve-calming popcorn.

Such is the place where
who-cares-about-us doesn't matter,
who-pays-attention-to-us ignored,
and the ubiquitous flow of tides avoids purchase
as we choose to stay afloat,
no run-aground landfall in sight.

Where better can the calm moon
the explosive sun
or a wind-greedy hurricane
express freely to us the leaks in time’s lifeboat,
the inevitable holes in its sails
the salty thirst of its survival,
all while nature’s perpetual welcome drifts beside us,
confirming we’re free,
not shipwrecked yet.

Oh, yes…

There are times,
when we imagine we’ll be savagely clinging to life,
grasping at aged seaweed strewn shorelines
where we too might find the FedEx box on shore,
discover a coconut to make as friend.

But for the fortunate…

Aloneness begs not hopelessness,
for as individualism’s constant companion,
solitude delivers ohms of the wind
and deflects persuasion’s persistent arrows
aimed at one’s heart,
where playtime Dodger-Dogs,
ice cream sundaes,
and bags of popcorn
remain vigil.

Still…

Even as we stay afloat with
no deserted island in sight,
echoing voices continue their warning
of the inevitable final wave as absolute.

Yet…

Here we remain
succumbing not to another’s reality,
holding instead to our own
unexplained,
tenacious,
survival.

We fear not…

For longevity continues riding the waves beside us,
urging mortality’s sea to put a smile on,
enjoining this collective voyage of untethered freedom,
for it may take us where only our precious dreams dare go.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 15, 2023
Freedom certainly does have tethers. For some it's an attitude. For others it's morality. And for some, like me, it's physical. Keeping me from floating free but getting all the popcorn I want and even a hotdog or two while on the road since I don't like boring baseball that much. But I still like ice cream. To me, it's my dreams, my stories and my real life, reimagined, that keeps me panning new stuff with effortless joy like floating on a cloud. All the aches and pains gone while immersed in the muse.

What a lovely way to put freedom the way you have… I thoroughly enjoyed your seaward adventure punctuated by your illustration.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 14, 2023
Sublime, what a ride, what a journey you describe, all on the grand expanse of the open sea of life. This has got to be one of your finest, with many more to come, as you go "where only our precious dreams dare go." Love it.


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