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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Woman Weed and Animal

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Enigmatic images sometimes become one’s most trusted companions in the quest for oneness.

Tuesday, November 21, 2023


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Woman Weed and Animal

 

Night
Ghost town
Distant lightning
Portends shadowy life
Tumbleweed meanders empty street
Coyote yelps
Turns into woman running
Desert hotel looms ominous
Old woman enters top floor room

Dust and sand swirl up stairwell
Across plank flooring
Shrouding woman's face before mirror askew
Reflecting lines of furrowed harvest
Plantings spent

Changes dress
Walks into watercolor painting
Ascends mountain
Woman disappears in clouds
Picture frame closes around

Eyes burn through gray shrouded peak
Seeks out ghost town below
More lightning
Shadows dance between buildings
Tumbleweed advances
Climbs to mountain top
Rests beside woman

Picture frame re-opens
Woman steps out
Tumbleweed accompanies
Woman lays atop bed's bare springs
Tumbleweed joins

Coyote howls

Door opens

Sunrise appears

Coyote climbs atop springs
Woman cradles weed and animal
Chanting a warrior's lament
Dream's reality apparent



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 25, 2023
I want to see the movie, too, Ron! I’d like to be in charge of the soundtrack!! This is an exciting writing — morphiously-sweeping, prickly, unfastening, chilling, satisfyingly smudging it all together and pulling it apart, story within story. So much appreciation from me about us all being pieces of each other. I like the timbre of this in the character of ‘tumbleweed’. Having lived six years in the dry and dusty wheat fields full of tumbleweeds, I know how fast they can travel in a roiling dust storm that takes power out for days, bones of the tumbleweeds stacked high against the barbed-wire fences. You really invited us into that picture frame. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 23, 2023
That was some dream! It could be the buildup for a surreal screenplay. Can I see the movie?

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 21, 2023
Stark images lead into a vivid, imaginative dream that contains its own reality. What is reality but possibly the exposure of a dream.


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