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Thanks Giving Forgiveness

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To know the grateful feeling of forgiveness, it seems important to incorporate the oneness of the 5 senses of collective harmony. (Painting by Sofiya Inger)

Wednesday, November 22, 2023


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Thanks Giving Forgiveness

 

Oh, how dissonant the wail of a remorseless anguish

Finding not the patchwork of protective harmony.

 

How eruptive are the jigsaw images

Of suffering's cyclonic rage

Searching for the redeeming admission

Of guilt’s admittance.

 

Vying for dominance comes with an overwhelming pungent odor

Permeating the oxygen

Of Nature’s fractured fragrance of purity.

 

Imposing bitters permeate

The savoring state of taste

 

While…

 

The Spirit of Love’s fingertips

Reaches forward

Bestowing rose petal gentleness

To comfort the painfully hewn patina

Of Healing's grace


 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 25, 2023
Well, this surely opens the door into many family gatherings. This piece emits a wise one’s gaze upon group discordance amidst the aroma of plentitude. The first couplet gives me the impression of a home-made quilt being tossed over squabbling relatives, muffling into quietude and adulting-skill-level appreciation. Second stanza actually provides me audio input of the skirmish turned Knives Out. And the term ‘cyclonic rage’ is magnificent. It fits that stanza’s ability to convey jigsaw fisticuffs flying around the needful want of accusation and aversion to taking responsibility for something. Striking to read the struggle having acridity polluting the very inhale. This writing’s merciful finish is so velvety that I feel calm just by reading it. You have touched on all the senses we have, Odin, with the ability to have them touch us back. ~~ djl

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on November 22, 2023
Thank goodness for the spirit of Love and her comfort.
Powerful thoughts and images, Odin.
Have a blessed Thanksgiving:)


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