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Ocean Weed Rafts

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Sargassum is a genus of large brown seaweed (a type of algae) with leafy appendages, branches and round, berrylike structures filled with oxygen that float in island-like masses and never attach to the seafloor. Thus, just as the atoms in solid wastes we discard from when we are alive, the casting into the ocean of cremation ashes are likely to make their way eventually to soil, where they will be incorporated into new plants and animals, that perhaps other humans will eventually eat. (Image from pinterest)

Thursday, January 11, 2024


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Ocean Weed Rafts

 

How gentle the slow journey

Where tranquility awaits its passengers

 

How possessive

This sway and swirl of Nature

Providing haven

For scattered ash of all kinds

 

Nary fierce rock

Or tsunami roar

Disturbs its phantom-like stillness

 

Often…

 

Like the dreamt-of-journeys never taken while living,

Time seems patient with its scattered ash atop ocean cover

Knowing to rush is not Sargassum’s purpose.

 

To travel as a shadow,

Slipping over the depths of life’s genealogy,

Purchase may simply be by its own evaporative nature,

Finding its gas-filled berries providing safe harbor

Until exposure finally exhausts its flotational buoyancy.

 

It is the arid transformation

That gives flight to the ashes of Nature

In its search for a new

And different beginning.

 

Such is the belief of those

Thrusting the ashes of the dear departed

Into the winds,

Accepting consciousness is gone,

But confident atoms find continuance in many forms.

 

Melancholia invades consciousness,

As having just cast cremated ashes into the Mediterranean,

I take my rest atop some rocks above a Mykonos beach.

Continuing to stare at the space of normal olive tree shadow,

Accepting the shadowless tree must be with special peace at the moment,

Its atoms of survival at rest,

Like my own.


 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on January 12, 2024
‘The Wide Sargassum Sea’ — and you were able to hand its quietness to us. My focus was attracted to this line: “Accepting consciousness is gone,” and it is good to not miss the written ‘space of shadow’ becoming ‘shadowless’. Vanishing and reappearing well put here and I especially liked the floating feeling, the meandering mindfulness, the silence. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 11, 2024
Your last stanza gives a geographical location for the ashes to begin their journey, ever so slowly over the literally billions of years that a sun can shine on a planet and motivate its atoms and molecules to travel through time and space to entirely new destinations of striking difference. Recycling built into the nature of nature. Well written of the permanence of change..

Ron


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