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· Patience Waning

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Hammock Guy

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Met many an artist in NY and Hollywood that seemed to experience another world. It wasn’t easy to encourage many to appreciate what they had,
Not what they wanted. There was one, though, that made me believe he was satisfied in living another world. From NY to Hollywood to up the coast a ways, but he told me he could make any day special once he closed his eyes.

Saturday, April 13, 2024


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Hammock Guy

 

Watching for the sun to set,

His eyes roam through roadside palm trees

Where so much white tries so hard.

 

Villas.

Hotels.

Mansions.

Life guard stations.

No life guards.

 

As he checks his watch often,

All seems so out of sync.

The sun taking its time

Like always he grumbles

 

He’s got him a hammock though.

Beats a cardboard box.

He sits.

He rocks.

Stares at the sandy flower beds of Lantana,

Having just learned their name.

Flowers were foreign growing up in a NY railroad apartment.

Door locked.

Shades pulled,

Allowing mere slivers of light to spill across his mattress.

Radiator always cold.

Winters,

Summers,

Just the same.

 

Flowers?

Something uptown people had.

 

Always the same.

 

Here he was mid-age,

Feeling in his 80s,

Swaying in his hammock to nowhere

Like an over ripe coconut looking for a place to drop

Waiting for…

 

Just waiting and watching

The sun to set and be rid of another day.

Sometimes it was the best part of the day.

Sandy beaches turning orange,

Getting ready to say hello to the blue dusk

Before the colors are swallowed by the dark of night.

 

Like me,

Waiting

For closed eyes to happen,

Wonderland’s curtain-raising hour.

Every night

It comes under eyelids of dreamt fantasies made real.

 

He mumbled to himself

“I’ve no right to be bitchin’.”

 

Curtain going up!

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 14, 2024
Poor guy. Sounds like a mid-life crisis, "mid-age but feeling in his eighties." Again, poor guy, who in watching the sunset just thinks of "getting rid of another day." He seems to save himself at the end of the poem, to stop bitchin' as the curtain rises.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 14, 2024
"Curtain going up!" brought to mind: "All the worlds a stage, and all the men and women merely players. They have their exits and their entrances; and one man in his time plays many parts."... If you were the richest man in the world, you still wouldn't have enough to buy life. Perhaps being truly alive, is when our hearts are fully aware of this precious gift; a treasure of inestimable worth. I have always hated hammocks. Enjoyed your thoughts. Thanks for sharing. Peace.... r


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