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A Father's Bequeathal

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On Father’s Day lessons learned from my father are remembered. I find it’s difficult to not “father” one’s children with the knowledge gleaned from one’s own father, providing discovery rather than command. I was fortunate to have had those many years with him. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, June 16, 2024


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A Father's Bequeathal


Like a snow-covered road
Winding upward through
Lesson-markers of
Redwood and pine
His time on this side
Remains an odyssey
Lovingly preserved

Rock and rut obstacles
Remain for tomorrows yet dawned
Destiny's beneath-the-surface hindrance
Reminds one will stumble again and again
Until watchfulness is learned

Such roads become trailheads
Traversing inevitable
Paths narrow
Climbing saps energy
Air becomes thin

Still
Above the clouds beckon

Such quiet guidance
He left behind
Frozen footprints of wisdom
For me to discover
In my own season



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on June 17, 2024
I really like what Ron has said here about your poem. Such wise term you have used in your introduction: “….providing discovery rather than command.” Lovely words to apply to a parent, be mother or father. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 16, 2024
From what you have written, very fine mentor your father was. But perhaps over 50% of who you are is in your genes. I'm sure you have wondered where your creativity, good health, strength and endurance has come from so that you can make use of those gems from your father as you pass them on to your children and grandchildren.

Ron


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