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Evolution's Stronghold

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Climbing mountains allows much of Nature’s constant changes to be appreciated as both danger and a calming of one’s inner stressful baggage. Climbing is a magical exercise where the past can be left behind as one’s invisible weight.

Friday, July 12, 2024


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 Evolution’s Stronghold

 

 

From mountain rock to valley scree

 

The journey begins

High atop a rugged peak

Where the air thin,

Calm,

Temperamental,

 Or violent.

 

The mountain summit stands resolute.

Time’s sentinel.

A carving of wind and weather

Ushered in by the relentless march of seasons

Holding its ground steadfast.

 

The pride of its monument endurance

Constantly on display.

 

But stone is vulnerable

Yielding to the whisperings of erosion,

The many visits of rain

Ice

And sun.

 

Piece by piece, rock crumbles,

Fragments break free,

Tumbling down gravity’s persistence,

A dance forward from mountain rock

To valley scree.

Nature’s journey of transformation,

Where becoming something new,

Remains still segments of the whole.

 

On the valley floor,

Scree lies in a scattered mosaic of the mountain as sire,

Each stone part of the story

Where fragments of memory

Form a tapestry of inevitable change,

A testament to the workings of time

And the layered beauty of impermanence

As it continues the cycle of sharing

The Grand Plan of Nature

Allowing the strongest shades of evolution

To eventually let go.

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 12, 2024
A version of evolution that is very geological in the sense that you focused on changes in our rocky crust created by the thrusting of continental plates up against one another gradually climbing into mountains of solid rock that gradually becomes layered scree, pummeled by ice, water and wind until it becomes granules, and eventually, soil that life can grab onto and grow.

The Appalachians are much older than the Rockies, and it shows.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 12, 2024
Your focus on mountains reminds us of the value and majesty that they truly exhibit. Yet even mountains go through their own evolution and change, as do all things in this world. As you wrote: "the layered beauty of impermanence."


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