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Rapacious Tsunamis

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Today we are engaged in a deadly global struggle for those who would intimidate, torture, and murder people for exercising the most basic freedoms. If we are to win this struggle and spread those freedoms, we must keep our own moral compass pointed in a true direction.
Barack Obama (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, September 21, 2024


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 Rapacious Tsunamis

 

Manufactured life,

a synthetic existence,

a dazzling illusion, hiding decay beneath

a shimmering mirage masking watery rot beneath.

From where such comes?


A twisted evolution,
a hunger for perfection,
a fear of the natural.

Paths of growth, molecule by molecule,
its osmosis bringing the promise of life.
But the thirst for more,
for what's beyond the natural order,
infects the very air we breathe.

Nature warns us,
with the rustling of leaves,
the whisper of the wind,
the silent plea of the dying seed

caught in the waves of amoral wash.

We wear masks of manufactured beauty,
concealing the scars of a broken humanity.

For…


Technology, a siren's call,
a gleaming facade of progress
knows not how to quell the gluttonous beast,
devouring all in its path.

 

Lest we drown of weakness,

hearken to the heart

 now a hardened shell of cynicism.,

 once a cradle of love.

 

For even as we struggle amidst the ruins,
a flicker of hope remains.

 

Embrace the quiet moments when the masks have fallen away,

when shorelines afford gentle lapping of reflected behavior,
and remember the simple truth:

 that beauty lies not in the veneer,
but in the raw, unfiltered essence of being.

 

Yes…


There's still time to shed the acidic slick atop the jetsam and flotsam,
to return to the innocence of the first breath,
to find solace in the natural symphony of life.

 

 

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 22, 2024
There are some remarkable phrasings in this insightful journey into the way of the world. I won't enumerate upon them all, suffice to say that your poem highlights in a profound manner the "nature of the beast" that we have to deal with as humans on this earth.

And yes, ditto Diana's comments on the AI image.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on September 21, 2024
Expecting to learn which artist you credit on this striking image, (because often you do source the images)…it was a big surprise that it is your perhaps new entrance into AI. I’m not even aware of what AI art actually is, for the digital art I make is with the iPencil and an iPad. The streaks in the monstrous wave ‘really’ caught my appreciation; and when I opened the image I saw the warthog(?) animal, the silhouette humans and, punching out from the picture,…the urban charbones of human industrial complex bootprints. Whole mural delivers. Effective choice of the word ‘rapacious,’ and ‘shimmering mirage.’ Your language mix of glut vs. ‘natural symphony’ offers the emphatic contrast — and one line alone presents this distinction: “the silent plea of the dying seed”. The second-to-last stanza affects me the most because I am aware of upcoming generations’ youth residing in that stanza, the healthier way of being, diet, activity, material reduction/thrift & consignment, gardening own produce, sharing things, even resourcefully recycling/repurposing. I’ve always felt change is: “start with the children, start with the youth.” Good piece for expansive mental floss. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 21, 2024
"Embrace the quiet moments when the masks have fallen away." Is the line that most touched me in this journey of our recent turmoil as technology marches on regardless of who uses it for what. It's great just to take a breather every day.

Today as I leaned back with the beam blocking the strong sun from my eyes and face, I observed three high flying jets screaming their way across the sky without leaving even a contrail. I lie there and listen to the birds singing, the occasional car driving by, and the neighbors moving about in the heat. Shedding the adventure of those highflying vessels going to distant places by hurried people and I'm glad that I'm not in that rat race anymore.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on September 21, 2024
An honest human response to the dangers of our day. Seeing our world, our very selves, as gifts, and that gifts can be lost, destroyed, or refused, reflects a humility of spirit needed to serve and love each other well. Thanks for your heartfelt reflection, Odin.


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