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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Sculpting Sound

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Many of us find pictures, paintings, etchings in the visualization of music’s power. Some of us find there is a sculpting of experience through sound and music that longs to be one’s final sense of life. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, October 19, 2024


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 Sculpting Sound

 

The cello weeps, a mournful sigh,
a lament for lost summers,
where soughing leaves and sun-drenched fields

kept memories intact.


Trumpet resonance shimmers, distant and hollow,
like the cries of migrating birds,
searching for solace in a fading light.

A drumbeat, slow and deliberate,
a heartbeat echoing in the cavernous space.


The syncopated rhythm of falling rain,
the gentle purchase of a waterfall,
a symphony of nature's lament.

The flute whispers a melody,
a fragile, ethereal song,
a memory of laughter,
of love lost and dreams forgotten.


The bassoon groans, a deep, resonating sigh,
a melancholic reflection of the soul.

The music fades, a slow, lingering ripple,
the hush of longing,
a yearning for a world lost,
a world of peace and quiet beauty,
a private world sculpted

A lifeline ever there

Awaiting the final diminuendo

Into breath’s pianissimo.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 23, 2024
When one finds peace and tranquility after a very busy life of chasing dreams that often don't come to pass, music is certainly one way to pause and reflect. Remembering the first time when those particular instruments were heard but not paid much attention to unless you were trying to play the instrument. And then, it was much more important to get the sound just right.

Unfortunately, while my hearing aids to help me understand conversation with other people better, I find that music is lost to me unless I take the hearing aids off and turn the volume up to where I can hear the real thing again, one more time, before I will be able to hear anything at all.

Ron

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on October 20, 2024
This poem masterfully evokes emotion through its vivid imagery and musical metaphors, blending sound and memory into a deeply moving reflection on loss and longing. The poet’s choice of instruments—each carrying its own emotional weight—creates a symphony of sorrow and nostalgia. The cello's mournful sigh, the trumpet's distant cry, and the bassoon's deep groan beautifully mirror the human experience of grief and reflection. The delicate transitions between nature and music add layers of meaning, reinforcing the poem's theme of yearning for a lost world. The final diminuendo leaves the reader with a poignant sense of quiet beauty, making this poem a captivating and resonant piece.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 20, 2024
Just as the human voice contains a quality of uniqueness to each individual, so also the wide variety of instruments, each of which have their own resonance and their own soul. This piece is evocative and beautifully rendered.


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