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· ECHOSIS

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Alone Together

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are some who dread the years ahead, while as writers, time seems to bring as its reward experienced words finally arriving. Then, for still others, a poem or two a day becomes possible. (Image by Odin AI)

Thursday, April 10, 2025


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 Alone Together

 

Moments Alone in darkness

Removed from day’s imitation

Invites quiet as comfort

 

Closing one’s eyes

Reveals childhood playgrounds

Where companions shared Alone

Telling of secrets

Once stories filling idle time

While cocooned in tree house intrigue

 

Such memories

Like under-rock-secrets

Found in shadowy woods

Forever remain as straying-off-trail-discoveries

One’s finish line for life’s stormy relay

A cross-country run through time

Finally becoming the dial-face in the sky

 

For some

 

Time’s aspect bears not a father’s face

Nor the big and little hands of a mother

Once gently nudging hours along

Instead

Paternal time now relaxes

 Daliesque

 

All names eventually merge

As a lamina among leaves

Embraced by the wind

Where remembrance flickers

Like one’s book of candles

Timeless pages once read by their own burning

Now

At last

Finally

Peacefully

Alone together

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 13, 2025
My childhood friends are either gone or demented. And I don't recall any discussion I had with childhood friends except when I do recall what someone said thinking about a particular instance in my childhood that was eventful… not day to day.

My dreams are with strangers conjuring up stranger tales that I don't know where they come from except out of the blue in my fertile imagination.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 11, 2025
a touching write that captures the bittersweet interplay of solitude, memory and the inevitable passage of time. Somehow time embraces and shapes us all until "Finally peacefully alone together." Yes.


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