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Hunter-Regret

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As several Europeon countries continue as the hotbed of threat; weaponry’s history of both survival and conquest may have reached a precipice. (Image 2001 Spaced Odysey)

Sunday, July 27, 2025


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 Hunter-Regret



Hunters
Passing gatherers along the way

Guided missiles
Tucked securely
Beneath wings borne of technology
Embracing payloads of fear

While

Nature’s winged
Eagle and hawk
Raven and sparrow
Continue to know only
Survival

And lest we forget

In the city’s canyons
Predators of another kind
Hunt for identity
Fortunes
Escape
Self respect lost
Long ago
While ignoring the obvious…

Comfort of simplicity



Survivalist trackers
Seeking abandoned fridge boxes
Haunting kindly soup kitchens
Before returning to the darkness

Somewhere in yesterday’s remembrance
The simple provider from caves
With bone
Arrow
Spear
Sought sustenance for
He
She
Little ones
Even pets

Eventually along this hunter line
Man’s hardwired survival instinct
Shorted out
Sparks flew
Minds became chaotic
Lost like downed power lines
Snaking wildly
Helplessly seeking to ground the pain

But

Like our synaptic wonder
Rescuing such out of control escape
Has become something
Only total shutdown might contain

In the meantime

Regret wanders through landscapes
Both internal and external awareness
Like a just born baby
We may have to start
From scratch
Throw some food
Purge our lungs of pain and frustration
Fill our diapers with innocent waste
Look for Nature’s maternal essence
And return to bone and perhaps
A rebirth





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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 27, 2025
A lament seemingly in counterbalance to the poem I posted today as well. Perhaps thinking along the same lines if stylistically different. Your with technological dread ("payloads of fear"), urban collapse with the city's canyons as a kind of modern wilderness., and finally synaptic overload ("downed power lines"). A excellent portrayal of today's reality.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 27, 2025
Reminded me of my novel, The Last Wanderer, imagining that a total shut down did occur.

We certainly have reached the unthinkable level of warfare, trying to contain it with feeble International laws that are broken easily by a simple threat, true or not.

We have to take the blinders off and find cause for why we are doing what we were doing rather than just doing it to get along.

Ron


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