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Lessons Awakened in Darkness

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As happens with many experiencing loss, the replacement is difficult to create, yet with perseverance, there is one’s imagination as mate.

Monday, August 25, 2025


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 Lessons Awakened in Darkness

 

 

 

Loss does not knock.

It arrives like a tide that forgets the moon,

pulling back the shoreline of everything familiar.

 

Last night…

The morning folded itself into a paper crane and flew into the dark,

 its wings stitched from promises not yet spoken.

 

Where once the sky held the breath of sunrises,

now it hangs like a canvas rinsed in charcoal,

clouds swollen with the weight of unshed memory.

 

In the hush between yesterday and now,

 the stars blinked out one by one,

never extinguished,

but swallowed by the silence that drapes itself over the bones of time.

 

I woke to a world…

 

Where fog had rewritten the horizon,

where the compass of my soul spun without pointing home.

 

The winds…

 

That once whispered comfort now speak in foreign tongues.

 

And I?

 

A vessel adrift, cradled by the ache of absence.

 

Still…

 

We lean into the night of tomorrow,

as if it were a door left ajar,

hoping the hinge creaks an inviting entrance to something unnamed

 but waiting.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on August 28, 2025
“The morning folded itself………….” my eyebrows physically went up with this line. The creativity of that expressive image was as airborne as the paper crane. Also widening my eyes is: “……silence that drapes itself over the bones of time.” That line glistens with originality and contains grace and ache, wisdom and emotional maturity. I just love it! Thank you ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 25, 2025
Filled with similes and metaphors that are stunning in their clarity, weaving a pattern of surreal dream world that is similar to a Dali painting.

Ron


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