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Compassion's Echo

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The every-day-world headlines suggest we are experiencing a pandemic that few seek remedial correction. A massive inoculation is Compassion, readily available, no prescription needed. (Image by Odin AI)

Monday, September 1, 2025


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 Compassion’s Echo

 

 

Empathy…

 

Once a pulse in the public square,

now flickers behind screens,

 scrolling past suffering

as if pain were just another post to be forgotten by morning.

Nationalism dresses itself in pride,

 minorities are erased,

their stories rewritten by power.

 

The span of such cruelty seems borderless.

 

At Sea…

 

A ship is sealed with salt and silence,

seven hundred souls adrift,

 barred from shore,

sleeping in salt,

waiting for mercy that never comes.

 Children counting stars in place of rescue,

the sea a cradle of indifference.

 

Deserts…

 

Where thirst speaks louder than law,

a policy that renders compassion mute,

 plastic jugs of mercy banned by regulation,

 as if kindness were contraband.

 

Borders…

 

Rise like fists,

walls of blame,

flags waving not in welcome,

but in warning.

 

Forests…

 

Where the last snow leopards vanish

 under the weight of greed,

their pelts traded for prestige,

their eyes never seen again.

 

Jungles…

 

Elephants fall not from age,

but from bullets carved in currency.

The jungle mourns in silence,

its grief unphotographed.

 

Cities…

 

Echo with nationalism,

where compassion is called weakness and cruelty wears a suit.

The marginalized are made myth,

their stories rewritten by those who never listen.

In lecture halls,

empathy declines like stock prices,

 a 48% drop in feeling,

replaced by the rise of curated selfhood.

 

And somewhere…

 

In the data stream,

a child cries but the algorithm does not hear.

 

Let us hope…

 

We are not permanently becoming a species of

distance,

 wired,

walled,

and only watching

as far too many continue to forget how to feel.

 

And yet hope is still breathing…

 

As voices rise in the streets,

not in anger,

but in song for the forgotten.

A professor teaches empathy again,

not as theory,

but as practice.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on September 3, 2025
This post is a portrait of the power of poetry. That’s a string of ‘p’ words for you. And the words you have chosen have been distilled to perfection in delivering the unmistakable naked truth of the fire swamp, quicksand pit into which our species has found itself trapped. The keen images you provide here have the close-up resolution of pores on an actor’s silver screen face. Better than a painting, more effective for me than a deeply-emotional classical music movement; can’t unsee “Borders..Rise like fists, walls of blame,” or “Children counting stars in place of rescue,” {the image of small innocents looking up and giving up — ruinous image to an intact soul} or “their eyes never seen again” or “flags waving not in welcome,/but in warning.” I like that your finish contains the antidote “not in anger,/but in song…..” for it is the intact soul who can hold both the dark and the light, one in each hand, and then put them together like you have here. Your graphic choice is fitting in so many ways. This work is a mural of verbal artistry, Odin. ‘Compassion’s Echo’ warrants carving into a stone cave wall somewhere for future generations if indeed our species survives this devolutionary spiral.~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 2, 2025
I don't recall any professors teaching empathy. But I do recall learning from them what was good and what was bad by the way they behaved and taught.

But empathy does not require college level thought. I have learned that the lowest of society have the most empathy for others. The higher one rises in the social game, the less likely that person has empathy for others.

Your prose this time covered many urgent issues. Some of them are actually caused by population growth among the poor, leading to desperate measures to get the basic things that empathetic people want to help with. While more new babies are born to poverty every year.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 1, 2025
What we have here are the great spread t natural and physical spaces from oceans to desert to cities that serve as metaphors suggestive of some kind of decline. "Empathy declines like stock prices" stands out to me of how our emotions have become devalued in today's world. Even more chilling, the line "in the data stream, a child cries but the algorithm does not hear," Now that's a mouthful where even children don't match up in the digital world.. The final stanza brings a sense of hope with the professor (sounds familiar to me) teaches empathy "not as theory, but as practice." Yes, that's what can still happen. Wow. Compassion's echo indeed.


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