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Chiseling Silence

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Legacies come in many forms, some of which are final thoughts rather than the norm of material possessions.


Sunday, October 5, 2025


Poem Artwork

 Chiseling Silence  

 

                  

From today’s yesterday,

memory, a moth-eaten quilt sewn by ghosts,

remains wrapped around the bones of childhood still warm with echo.

 

Chalk-dusted sidewalks hold firm

where rubber balls ricochet like laughter,

marbles roll beneath floorboards like forgotten dreams,

and sneakers thread joy into the seams of summer.

 

To the city’s pulse,

taxi horns scream like impatient heartbeats,

subway rails groan like old bones,

pigeons coo lullabies to concrete gods,

and sailboats drift across Central Park’s lake like paper prayers on water.

 

Returning to the hearth of touch:

a mother’s lullaby echos in enjambment,

a father’s silence tucks between stanzas,

a grandfather’s wisdom etches in ellipses,

a grandmother’s faith stitches into the hem of every closing line.

 

And along comes grief…

 

A violin string stretched across the ribcage relying on faith,

a lantern hung in the mouth of a cave.

 

Such becomes the driftwood of time,

each word a candle lit in the aura of silence,

each stanza a tombstone carved with breath,

each revision a ritual of resurrection.

 

The past…

 

Warding off suffocation in a mausoleum where memory sleeps in velvet-lined coffins

of locked drawers, a poem awaits the end of a burning house.

Pages of verse curl like commas before the end

as the writer strokes the keys immersed in embers of a dying fire.

Such is a final phrase, its premise flickering,

falling through vaporous fog.

 

His breath becomes ellipses trailing into the void,

while through his fading pulse,

words remain constellations of keystrokes suspended in the cloud’s ether.

 

Immortal as satellites mapping the ache of strangers, words refuse death.

They archive the soul.

They outlive the pulse.

They are the breath after breath is gone.

 

The finished sculpture of one man’s peace.

 

 



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Reviewed by William haynes
Reviewed on October 5, 2025
I enjoyed your poem/ great use of metaphors/ kind of depressing/

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 5, 2025
The power of this piece about legacy lies in the individual verses and the image they contain:

The city imagery - chalk-dusted sidewalks, subway rails groaning like old bones, pigeons cooing lullabies.

"And along comes grief" is especially striking: the violin string stretched across the ribcage, the lantern in the cave.

"each revision a ritual of resurrection." Now, that's truly what the poet aspires for in the preservation of words thru poems. Remarkable all.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 5, 2025
You're right about most people don't think of ones Legacy to be words except perhaps with famous authors with oft quoted lines.

As you ramble through many experiences that you wrote about and then posted your nearly 4000 prosetry offerings here on the net, they are firmly in cyberspace.

While it may be difficult in the future to find you by your Wikipedia page, if someone should ask AI to look up a particular phrase that they remembered from someone they don't remember, like you, they may be surprised to find you, the author. Or, if they know your name, they may discover many works by you.

I have found that all I have to do is write a few words about something I've written, and then add my name, and AI quickly finds my postings here much faster than on my website.

Ron


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