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Nocturne of Shifting Mirrors

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Sometimes, the tossing and turning of a night’s attempt to offer sleep,
we are surprised with the unexpected resolve. (Image by Wyeth)

Saturday, November 22, 2025


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Nocturne of Shifting Mirrors

 

Night folds itself like origami made of smoke,

each crease opening into a labyrinth

where clocks melt into rivers

and staircases climb into the mouths of stars.

 

The floor tilts,

a ship’s deck in storm,

and I am both passenger and wave,

both drowning and the sea itself.

 

Footsteps echo, not mine, but borrowed,

as though the deck remembers every traveler who has passed.

 

Dreams arrive in fragments:

a violin bleeding notes that smell of burnt sugar,

wolves with glass teeth crunching like shattered chandeliers,

and staircases slick with oil that pulse beneath my hands.

 

The air thickens,

a syrup of flowing silence,

and the moon becomes a single eye watching,

unblinking, its gaze heavy as iron locks.

But just as the nightmare leans close enough to taste,

its breath sour with forgotten fears,

a tremor of light threads through the dark

like dawn rehearsing its lines behind the curtain of night.

 

A renegade nightmare leans closer,

its breath damp and sour,

its voice a chorus of rusted hinges creaking open in unison.

I feel its weight pressing against my chest like wet sand,

each grain a memory I cannot name.

 

But then,

a tremor of light threads through,

smelling of rain on stone,

sounding like a lullaby played on glass bottles.

 

The monster softens, its growls dissolving into the hum of bees in summer fields.

The labyrinth folds shut,

its walls now paper-thin,

fluttering like curtains in a gentle breeze.

 

Morning arrives not with thunder

but with the tenderness of rain sliding down a windowpane,

each drop a language of love spoken by the day itself.

 

I wake,

not startled, but held,

as though the world itself has leaned down to whisper:

you are safe,

you are loved.


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 23, 2025
You certainly channeled your inner Salvador Dali for this one! Your words were a canvas of images like his. The kind of images that appear in a nightmare that keeps one awake well beyond wanting to be awake. We all get them, but wouldn't want necessarily to admit it.

A great source of short stories if one smooths out the rough edges created by paradox.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 23, 2025
I see a dreamscape that alternates between nightmare and solace, between fear and tenderness. Clocks melting into rivers and staircases climbing into stars remind me of Dali's dreamlike distortions. Notes that smell of burst sugar, wolves with glass teeth, and staircases that pulse beneath my hands only heighten the uncanny atmosphere. Such a visual, cinematic poem ultimately evoking the night as both adversary and healer, indeed a mirror that shifts until it finally reveals, yes, love. Well done.


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