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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Gravity of Unfinished Fire

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Passion can feel lost at times, but through the loss one can find such dynamics in places not frequented by flesh. (Image by Odin AI)

Monday, January 19, 2026


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 Gravity of Unfinished Fire

 

From the remains of yesterday’s blaze
I lift myself,
like a clock rebuilt out of
half‑remembered heartbeats.
Ash teaches me its secret,
that endings behave like door hinges,
creaking open to rooms
no one knew were waiting.

The world exhales its quiet prophecy,
braiding time the way rivers
braid sunlight into their surface.


Everything hums,
a choir of forgotten metals
learning again how to shine.
I lean into that murmured promise,
letting it settle along my ribs
like migrating birds choosing rest.

Passion returns in slow thunder,
rolling through the hollows of me
like a cello bow drawn across
a bridge made of wind.


In that trembling,
another witness awakens,
a tiny moth tapping at the lamplight,
feeling the same subtle quake
of something being reborn.

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 20, 2026
I tried rebuilding a fancy clock once. But when I released the last screw holding it together, it violently exploded into 100s of pieces. The reason why it wasn't working was that it was wound too tight. I guess like some poets. At that point I decided not to be a clock worker. Perhaps I should have and fixed it with some help.

As far as passion, when I get into writing a story, I forget everything else and enter the story with great passion. Fortunately, my best stories have a definite sexual connotation from my dreams.

I guess I have to attribute that to recording my Night Moves, like Bob Seger.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 19, 2026
Your poem carries that unmistakable sense of renewal, using vivid, elemental imagery to show how transformation happens quietly and from within. The metaphors feel both intimate and expansive, and the final moth image lands with a subtle, luminous grace. Love it.


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