Let Me Take You (poem) by Kathleen L. McDonald on AuthorsDen

Let Me Take You
by Kathleen L. McDonald → (All Poetry by Kathleen L. McDonald)
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When two are so deeply in love they can soar.

Let Me Take You By Kathy Lynn . “Let me take you, trust in me” As he turned her palms up to kiss them Pressing his lips to one and then the other “Let me show you how I truly feel” . Cupping her face and stroking Her cheeks with his thumbs As his fingers slid back into her hair “Let me take you”, as his lips cruised over hers . He asked for complete surrender And surrender was a lot to ask She gave him her mouth and Then she gave him her body . They were dancing again, circling, Swaying as the dreamy pleasure He offered slipped into her like rich wine “Let me take you”. He whispered . He was murmuring in her ear about Her skin, her scent as he stroked over her She felt like she was floating not dancing Giving him what he wanted, she surrendered . Though it was slow, he could feel it That gorgeous yielding of self Undressing her as they danced Taking almost painful care . Taking almost painful pleasure As he removed each barrier that Blocked his hands from her flesh Slowly inch by inch she yielded . It was erotic, dancing in the firelight The candlelight her naked body Pressed close to his while he Was still completely clothed . The light played over her skin The chill making her shiver Under his adoring hands, feeling Her pulse jump under his mouth . Her breath catching as he touched her Jerking as sensations overwhelmed Digging her nails into him as he Began the serenade of love . Little tortuous stokes that Had her breath going short and harsh His own blood pumping madly “Let me take you” he whispered . Her body plunged and melted against his Eyes glazed and stunned by emotions He poured her unto the bed And she watched him as he undressed . Skimming his finger over her leg Lifting it and bending it he rubbed His lips along her calf “So much more I want of you” . Yes, so much more he wanted And surrendering to it, to him Gave him all he wanted The deepest, darkest pleasures . Quivered inside of her As he exploited and explored Taking and taking Until they both reached ecstasy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Erotic and passionate; would that such were so for all relationships. Thank you, Kathy Lynn. Love, hugs, and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Wow Kathleen, this is something else, got my tempreture rising. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Your grasp of romance writing is full and passionate and rings with desire and heat but unlike erotica alone it also has a touch of class that makes your images stand out as special. Well done Kathy.
hugs
Fee