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Childhood Hero
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Childhood Hero


 


A room filled with tragic sorrow,
Deep sadness beyond compare-
All eyes filled with tears,
As the Preacher began a prayer


 


Each head bowed in silence,
family and friends alike-
Amen, would leave them aching,
As the speaker adjusted the mic


 


A man quite young and handsome,
stood before a weeping crowd-
To share his best friend’s eulogy,
he spoke clear and loud


 


A practiced speech he started,
but soon his words would stray-
for he wanted all to know,
the true honor he felt this day


 


He smiled as he shared a mem’ry,
fought back tears with many more,
Baseball games, and their first cars-
Best buds since the age of four


 


And so he ended his speech in fondness,
telling stories of long ago-
Not only was his friend a soldier,
he was always his childhood hero


 


© Lisa Hilbers
March 25, 2007


 


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 Reviews of "Childhood Hero"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on May 25, 2007
a wonderful poem
loved the emotion here
sad but could feel the sense of honor
and pride

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Sad, but an excellent offering my friend...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Lisa,

Brought back memories of a childhood friend I lost in Viet Nam. It was so hard saying good-bye. Excellent write my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Lisa, such a well written piece. Eulogies are usually very difficult to get through, so much to say, so little time. Sad, so sad.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
What a beautiful and heartfelt write,
Love, PAMELA

Reviewed on March 25, 2007
O, Lisa, this is beautiful! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
You never fail me when I am needing solace and reassurance, Lisa, you never have and I am happy to see that you are still doing the wonderful work that you do. It was so nice to meet an old friend as I looked around the den today. I hope you and yours are well.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
The sacrifice of many lives has left the sadness of loss and yet the memories of Heroes will last into Eternity...

You express well the tribute of one Soldier, Friend,.....Heroe...


Nicely penned.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Deeply heartfelt offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
A gripping poem that depicts the hero and friend in such tight bond with the loss being deeply felt! Beautifully scribed Lisa!
Good to see you;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
This is a salute to the fallen heros in a war that keeps on breaking the hearts of the survivors. You brought us into the church and into the heart of the ones left behind...they too become heros for trying to continue with life after their loss. Well done Lisa, nice to see you posting again, we have missed you.

Fee

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
A beautiful, poignant tribute.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Truly sad, and I know the feeling all too well. As Leland says below, and as General Sherman said, War truly is Hell.

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

A deep poemization beautifully poetized.

Blessed are those that can sing the magic of frienship.

Enjoyed the reading of "Childhood Hero".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
War is hell and you have captured with these vivid images some of its most bitter aftermath.
Love and {{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}},
Leland

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
...and a hero to each of us who loves and honors freedom, Lisa. With a mist in my eyes, I think of the fallen I have known and once again understand the sacrifice that it has taken for me to live my life in liberty. So many lives lost, so much blood shed, so much honor and pride exhibited by them, for each of us to learn from. Freedom is not now, has never been and will never be, free. Thank you for always remembering our soldiers, the ones serving and those lost to us, Lisa, and for this outstanding poem of gratitude and respect, honoring one of our fallen sons.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Dear Lisa:

An all too common theme you write of. You've translated that intimacy of friends to well. I felt as though I were there and tried as though I were. A beautifully sorrowful piece.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Linda,

Welcome home. You've been missed--

Thank God not all have forgotten the sacrifice being made for our freedom by brave men and women in uniform. You do them honor in powerfully moving verse: and for that, I thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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