This is romantic poetry at it's very best and i could feel the desire based on love emanating with every word. Plus the girl in illustration is almost as pretty as you. Well done.
Felix
A search for the ghost of a chorus girl chorine haunting a costume designer’s Manhattan apartment leads to an encounter with an eccentric, mischievous witch with the ability to send folks back through time…in this case, the 1919 Ziegfeld Follies.
Felix
Each line builds with passion. Excellent!
Cynthia