Walking away (poem) by Tonya I on AuthorsDen

Walking away
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18.06.2003 Rain and tears, hand in hand... Love hurts when it goes wrong... (this isn't my own life experience, but i'm sure many will be able to relate to it...)

How can you walk away, When I'm just standing here, And there is so much to say. My eyes cried out. But you're just walking away Pretending you don't know What I'm about Bitter taste of my pain Is killing my heart Trembling in the rain I'm standing cold and feeling faint But all you do Is keep on walking away... How can you put me through this When you look into my crying eyes, Feeling my heart breaking, Me becoming just a half Seeing my pain, You do nothing but Keep on walking away... How could you leave me Standing, crying out in the rain You left me all alone, All alone, On that painfully unforgettable night Whilst I cried, shrugging my shoulders, Keeping track of my thoughts and Trying to chase away my worries... I walked alone slowly, Down the wet road to loneliness To the darkest place of my fears Oh, how desperate my heart Felt for comfort and love, Just like my soul, all emptied out, The rain kept falling, Washing away the traces of the night... Traces of my life.... As you walked away that time.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

Stong raw emotions grip the heart, outstanding write, Tonya.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Heartwrenching and gripping write. I too have experienced heartbreak. Love is fragile and breaks easily. I don't have any words of the wise to help you through this -- except the right one for you is out there.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Oh this is good! Anyone who has ever been in love and lost will relate to this.