and you said
"you could write me a poem,
i know you can"...
and i think
'oh, can i...can i write
you...a poem?'
and you wrote
and i saw...
and i read
of 'red wine'
and i fell right under
your word-woven spell
and so, words
and more words
now are coming and
coming and i can't
control what my
body is saying
so i widen these hips
and i open
my lips
and send hard
rains of
passion and fury
but..where?
the fury
my own, now
just take all i own
now ...oh God, now!
how? how?
if i really believed...
i could walk through
the night
and look down
as I lay myself
bare...
nothing more
naked
than here..
i am afraid
i am speaking the
moon through
your hair
as i tear
my own
heart
while
my body
cries out
and
i lay here
in
still-life
alone in my bed
it is all in
my head!
so I'll
make all that's
dreamt of
a spirit..a poem
for you
here...
a poem
deep red and
drunk on a dare
and you said...?
~~~~
inspired by a poem read by a poet who simply, through his words, makes me write... wmh, my friend... from this 'girl at a window'... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Salvador Dali Girl at a Window. 1925 Museo Español de Arte Contemporáneo, Madrid
splendid the best poem I have read in a long time! Could be made into a song I think. Bill
Hugs loved it loved it.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2002
I agree with La Belle and Peggy--wonderful!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2002
Wow, I love this amazing work!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2002
Micha,
this was an excellent response challenge of the {moon} I love it.. tyou did this so welll.
so very well the imagery and thoughts. magical....
Take care...
Peggy
This book has been eight years in the making. It is mostly a jumble of thoughts written down in old spiral notebooks and hidden in the bottom drawer underneath various manuals for software packages and hardware long since turned obsolete.
A book for every Muslim and everyone wishing to know about their way of life. The Diary of the Camp Manager at Mundihar following the South Asian Earthquake - October 2005. An account of life after the Earthquake in one of the largest of the 161 camp
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Hugs loved it loved it.
this was an excellent response challenge of the {moon} I love it.. tyou did this so welll.
so very well the imagery and thoughts. magical....
Take care...
Peggy