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     It's just a glimpse at life and how we take it. A story may be the same, but each reader carries a different interpretation filtered through their own set of beliefs and experiences.

 

The rain murmured through the cemented roofs making the people sleeping dream a bit sweeter. The cold breeze of the morning air arrested all Belle’s capability to finally rise. She was clutching her blanket, feeling the security and warmth it brought her. The rain mellowed down, she could hear the busy street outside of her house. Vegetable vendors lined up the road, enticing the early risers and joggers to buy some of their produce. Belle was used to the noise outside. She didn’t mind, but she hated waking up too early in the morning every single day especially in a weather like this. She was still hooked in the softness of the mattress and her comfortable pillow. But, she needed to work. The store was not going to tend itself.

She begun her day with a quick shower. Boiled some water for her coffee and placed it in a thermo regulated bottle water. Before quarter to five am hit, she was already opening the store. It was like that every day. On her own, she carried some heavy boxes and plastic crates of her merchandise for display. Next she’d pour four containers each containing seventeen kilos of cooking oil into smaller bottles, after the oil would be the vinegar. She was getting tired of her life. The repetition of it was draining her. There was not much rest, even on Sundays she remained open. There was always a lot to do. She would repack a whole sack of sugar, cornstarch, flour, and other basic necessities and sell them per half kilo to the people. Even during sickness, she had no choice but to tend the store. It was like that every day. She’d be so busy that there wasn’t much time to talk to her neighbors. Although there’d be some occasional exchanges of smiles and commenting about prices going up, but that was it. Belle was worn out. Although she was still able to smile seeing her earnings at the end of the day. But it was tiring. She needed help. She would hire someone, only if she could afford it. But, taxes, rentals, permits, electricity, and of course the store had to keep running. There wasn’t much money left for her to be able to hire help.

Belle closed the store at 6pm. She’d carry back the heavy displays inside the store. It would usually take her 20-30 minutes. The day would be soon over for Belle. She was always walking home while admiring the colors of the sky during sunset. Before 7pm, she had already reached her house. Her house was not big, but it was made of concrete. It was strong and had stood too many storms. She’d take a warm shower, ate her dinner, and finally took her rest. She would read a book to entertain herself. Hoping that it would drown her repetitive life. It terrified her, caused her worry and anxiety knowing her life had become a routine. Her life reminded her of the movie “Groundhog Day”, where everything was the same. She kept repeating it again and again and again. At times, ending it had crossed her mind. For her, her life never mattered at all. She was a mere background in her own life story. She was no heroine. At 9pm, she had dozed of and tomorrow would be a call of a new day, but just the same.

Editha, a middle aged woman, awoke at 1am. The rain was pouring hard. There were some buckets placed inside her house catching the rain that went through the holes in her roof. Her roof was made of Nipa leaves. She was lucky to still have a roof after being hit by a strong typhoon. She quickly rose from her hard bed made from bamboo. She had her cold shower which instantly woke her senses up. Before 2am hit the clock, she was in the road with her merchandise and awaiting for a vehicle to pass. She didn’t care if it was raining hard. She was armed with her granddaughter’s umbrella and a basket full of fresh vegetables and bananas. She waited for 20 minutes before she was able to get a ride at a passenger vehicle heading to the town’s market. At  3am, she had secured her selling spot by the road. The rain had mellowed down, and she had laid out an on the wet ground an empty sack to place her merchandise. She had cabbages, okras, eggplants, and bananas. She took out a small stool and presto, she was waiting for customers. She told the vegetable vendor next to her to keep an eye on her goods. She stood up and went to a nearby store and bought some cheap 3in1 hot coffee.

It was past 7am, it was time for them to leave the side of the road or they would be fined. Only half of her vegetables were bought that day. She needed to go house to house to sell some more.

Around 8am, Editha sold most of her vegetables. For her, that was a good day. She went to Belle’s store to wait for the passenger vehicle to pick her up. Every ride cost her a hundred pesos, so she was patient to wait for other passengers as well. If she was alone, she’d pay three hundred and most of her earnings would be allotted only to her fair back home.

At 9am, her ride was there along with the other passengers. She bid Belled goodbye. Thankful that finally she was going home.

When she got home, there was no time to rest. She took some bread and water, proceeded to harvest some vegetables on their hill. She walked for three hours before reaching their vegetable garden. She arrived at noon. There she ate her bread, rested for a while and started to pick some ripe bananas and vegetables. Before 5pm hit, she was on her way down the hill along with the fresh produce.

Editha reached her home just before 8pm. At this point, she was too tired. She was glad there was dinner waiting for her. Her daughter brought her fish and rice. It was a good day. She ate heartily while having a lively conversation with her daughter and granddaughter.

“How do you do it, grandma, at your age?”, her granddaughter asked, she was around ten.

“Well, there is lot of perspectives in the way you live your life, honey. You can focus on the highlights of it as if that was all that happened all day. For instance, having you here. That is my precious gift. Or, you can let the tediousness of life drive you insane.”

At 9pm, she slept and yes, at 1am she’d be waking up again to start her day over again.

Two different lives, two different people, but leading to the same routines and monotonous lives

It's just a glimpse at life and how we take it.

 

 

End. Thank you so much. You have a wonderful day. 

 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/3/2022
Yes, two tedious lives and a peak at what life is like for enterprising businesswomen in the Philippines making a living as best they can without a man to provide anything for them. People need to read this to get a better understanding of what most of the people in the world do every day with little let up until they die. Living tedious, boring lives.

My partner is like that. Now that I am growing older and no longer leaving the house, my routine has become very routine, and as my caregiver, boring and something she cannot get out of. I have provided well for her and hope that I leave soon so that while she is still healthy she can travel and do some of the things she wishes to do, like returned to Vietnam for a while, but she can't when I need her every day.

Worse, my tenant, Editha (her real name) has worked the same factory job for close to 30 years. And leads a very routine and boring life as she provides for an uncaring family back home in the Philippines who are living off her like her ex-husband did. This tedious life has left her, while still beautiful, quite uninteresting to those she has met and dated online angry and caught like in a trap. I try to counsel her, but I can't do any real help. She has to break the routine herself.

Ron
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 10/3/2022
A beautiful story rendered through glimpsing the lives of two hardworking women. Editha got it right by adapting the perspective of focusing on the highlights.

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