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All Right, Good Night
by Ronald W. Hull
Monday, March 24, 2014

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     This story was written by a high school friend and writing collaborator, Douglas W. Boucher. I asked him if I could post it here.

The overnight flight was normal up to that point, an hour after takeoff on a six hour journey. The aircraft commander had leveled off the plane at 35,000 feet over the Gulf of Siam and set the cruise control for the non-stop flight to Peking. The first leg would be over water and there would be nothing to see, especially since it was night and there were only a few fishermen far below in the dark. The cabin crew had nothing to do; the passengers were almost all asleep in the darkened aircraft, cruising with barely a whisper. The pilot had just signed off with Kuala Lumpur Area Control, saying “All Right, Good Night” and the aircraft call sign when a hidden monster broke loose.

Something, somewhere, deep in the unbelievably complex electronic guidance, navigation, and communications system decided it was time to die. A little whiff of smoke and a few sparks were all that anybody could see, but nobody did see it, for the mystery was hidden deep in a printed circuit board buried deep in an electronic panel that was hidden deep in the soul of the aircraft. A few clues were given, an audible alarm, a red light, and an urgent shaking of the control wheel that told the pilots that something had gone wrong, something had gone seriously wrong, and they had only seconds to react.

Abort! Return to land. Command the flight computer to turn 140 degrees to port, command descent to stay below most traffic, in an effort to return to the nearest land, the north-east coast of Malaysia only thirty minutes away. The aircraft obeyed his commands and started the slow turn to left while beginning the descent smoothly and silently. Few of those on board sensed the turn or saw the stars turn to the right. Nobody called home to say “Honey, I think something is wrong.”

The co-pilot was back on the radio, having just switched off from area control, trying to reach approach control to get back into a landing pattern when the hissing started. The hissing in the earphones, the hissing of an electronic fire crawling like a snake through a dying circuit board, killing the connections, turning off the transmitter. And then the smoke started. He knew this meant terrible trouble, as did the pilot, but there was nothing they could do about it. Still they tried; they tried everything they had learned in thousands of hours in the air. Nothing worked. The smoke got worse. Deadly. 

Almost two minutes passed. The aircraft autopilot leveled off, and finished its turn so smoothly the passengers barely noticed. Few were awake enough to notice, but the cabin crew knew that something was wrong. The chief steward tried to open the pilot’s compartment door, but it was securely locked from the inside to prevent hijackings. Then, the crew also noticed the smoke, now just little wisps from the ventilation system indicating that the smoke was spreading, poisoning the air throughout the entire fuselage, putting everyone into a long, final sleep. The aircraft flew on. Over Malaysia, over Sumatra, and out over the southern Indian Ocean, cruising straight and level as it had been told to do. It was on a course that would minimize damage and injuries on the ground. It followed its latest instructions exactly. It would do so until it too died. 

Seven hours later, somewhere over the southern Indian Ocean, the aircraft ran out of fuel and quickly descended, a silent ghost ship, with 239 souls on board, slipping from the glorious sky to meet the cold waters that would embrace it for centuries.        

© 24 April 2014 by Douglas W. Boucher

This work of fiction is dedicated to the memory of the Crew and Passengers of Malaysia Airlines Flight 370. It was originally published 24 April 2014 and slightly revised 31 March 2016.

The author is a retired Air Force Major and a private pilot who has experienced several in-flight emergencies including an explosive decompression and rapid descent half way across the Pacific in a C-141, an engine explosion and fire shortly after takeoff in a DC-10, and had a close friend who died of smoke inhalation on a commercial plane that had an in-flight fire in a bathroom. He has written a memoire of his Air Force career titled “Watching from the Edge of Infinity.”

 

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Reviewed by Mary Patterson 4/16/2016
Hopefully they will some day find the black box and learn what really happened. Thanks for sharing this with us. Doug's book sounds intriguing...M
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/16/2014
Excellent post; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 4/6/2014
I'd be curious to see if the black box will have the diagnostic tools to dig into just this sort of failure. Well told and highly plausible. I presume however the crew would have had a clean oxygen supply and the ability to fly manually so??????? Patrick
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel) 3/28/2014
It may have happened this way. The search is still going on, and no one is for certain whether or not those objects they have seen through the satellites are belonging to the Malaysian jet. No dead bodies of any passengers have been surfacing all through this time. Really strange indeed!! Anyway... Thank you for sharing!

Sandie
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 3/25/2014
Sure sounds like an account of what might have actually happened...thanks for sharing, Ronald.

Anna
Reviewed by E Phillips 3/25/2014
This is a very plausible account. It's still hard to ignore something very toxic such as those lithium batteries in the cargo hold as having had played a role in this tragedy.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 3/24/2014
A very touching work! I hope that the people were passed out before they hit the water!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by J. Roseline 3/24/2014
A very good title , which told us from the beginning on what you going to write , nice you thought of writing this pieceJK
Reviewed by Karen McKeever 3/24/2014
Great story and very well executed by Doug. I hope it will give some peace to the families of Malaysia Flight 370. My curiosity is piqued by "Watching from the Edge of Infinity". Thank you, Ron for sharing this with us!
Karen
Reviewed by Michael Jones 3/24/2014
It is good Ron that your friend memorialize them, a good write. Makes me think about the Bermuda Triangle. They are flying floating in the oceans of heaven now, thank you God for oceans of consoling blue skies. Peace!!!
Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com 3/24/2014
Wow Ron... Doug did a good job!
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 3/24/2014
this is a well done story he wrote and his book sounds very interesting
budd
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 3/24/2014
Yup. I knew this was about that Malaysia plane. Neatly told. Coulda happen just like that. Really liked the story.

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