A lovers dance adrift in blue
Waterfalls of sultry moves
Torrent passions enlaced
Our bodies sinewy embrace
Burning kisses of desire
Across skin of sapphire
Your maleness abloom
Crowning into this cobalt womb
Coupled quest for loves purity
Loving eyes locked in security
Sweet tease of secret spots
Soft touches in this lovers knot
Iridescent ribbons of heat rise
With each out breath of lovers sighs
Flickered shadows cast on walls
Displayed carnality enthralled
Desire hath reached a fervent pitch
Our hearts fire has found its niche
So in these arms of lapis lay
Your tempest soul through out the day
For at night with dark rich hues
A lovers dance adrift in blue.
DeeŠ2002/10/13
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Reviewed by Janice (Jan) Jarnagin (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2002
**Sigh** Beautiful!!! Great write and presentation. The picture was a wonderful touch....beautiful.
Hugs,
Jan
Dee,
What a wonderful poem. So perfectly written. Your words painted a picture as vivid as any paint brush could have done! Keep up the wonderful work my friend.
this is perfect.. just absolutly perfect.
it's one of those that i wish i had written myself...
keep it up dee you are a wonderful poetess...
love your friend steve xx
Dive into an enchanting adventure! This light-hearted romance will transport you to 17th-century Scotland, where a free-spirited 21st-century heroine brings love & laughter to a stressed-out laird's life - with a little help from the Fae!
In the predawn hours during a solitary ride on her ranch, Montana Freeborn collides with Seth Phoenix, centaur-turned-man and the embodiment of her psychic visions.
Hugs,
Jan
What a wonderful poem. So perfectly written. Your words painted a picture as vivid as any paint brush could have done! Keep up the wonderful work my friend.
it's one of those that i wish i had written myself...
keep it up dee you are a wonderful poetess...
love your friend steve xx
Exquisite writing Dee!
Jack
This was beautiful.
subtle sensual write done so classy..
this is excellent and the pic was perfect.
Peg