The Final Blow (poem) by Dee C. on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 31, 2004

Dee
Death comes to us all but once. Some too early, some too late
Some deaths to worship, some deaths to hate.

Yes you've captured it here.
Best wishes
Miller

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

Dee,
One of the best descriptions I've ever read of a broken love. You are doing some deep dark awesome work. I must come back and read some more!

Sherry

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Battle cry indeed! Nothing left after the massacre is their? But maybe the ground screaming out the crime on deaf ears. Much pain and sorrow here. Murch loss I believe. Bill Murray

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2004

cool write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 15, 2004

dark, insightful imagery ...

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

ohhh what a battle cries....I felt the pain...Marco

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

Deep,dark and powerful! Vivid images,
in this chiller,Dee!Good to see you;-)!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

A dark gem
great write
enjoyed very much

William

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

Great images. You certainly describe "evil eyes" well. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

((((dee))))

*shivers* a strong, emotional write and pic--perfectly complementary to each other

hope you're okay

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

The title had me concerned I must admitt, but oh boy what you say, peirces the heart.

Very good, excellently expressed write..GOOd luck..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

OOOhhh!!

This rips the heart to pieces Dee C!!

Warm love Tinka

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

So great to see you Dee, but OMG.
Put my heart through the shredder here.
Awesome, powerful.
Warn me next time.
John

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

DEE C{{HUGS}}}}
i always miss ya....
"Within a heart dies

A soul starts to cry

Dead eyes dry

A voice with no reply

Strong bonds broken

Never to be mended

Words go unspoken"

Love ends < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < <SO very true this one touches deeply MI Lady!!!!!

Lady peg