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Drag the lake
by Will Bates → (All Poetry by Will Bates)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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She asked " Is this depth realy you ? " I said it just takes time for me to surface, She smiled " I believe you", we walked, I got the bends I whispered to myself, Exhaled, Sank fast as ever back to the mud floor, Lungs full, I love you kid, I love you so much, Kiss me, Save me. (c)2009 will bates

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Reviewed by Tommy Thomas

Reviewed on April 8, 2009

Yes, we can be at times where the depth of life drags us down and we get the bends and have to go back down. Very good poem.

Tommy

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

This is very good,interesting to read,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

Interesting indeed dear man..stay safe and well..Hugsss

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 31, 2009

Will,
I like the idea here and I see the metaphor but something bothers me, the end comes too fast; sorry, I don't mean to be negative or overcritical because I do like your writing. I know you'll understand.
John

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