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Boy
by Fabian Black → (All Poetry by Fabian Black)
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a very short poem.

 

BOY
 
Legs drawn up
so deeply asleep.
Teddy and precious crocodile
close by, it touches me.
Eyelids tight sealed
lips parted. So still,
head on your arm, a flutter
of gentle breath.
I sit on your bed, observing.
You will never be this young again
And I?
I will always be old to you, my child

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 Reviews of "Boy"
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Indeed a touching moment. These little observations are like keepsakes that we keep the rest of our lives. Well done, Fabian.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Oh how touchingly passionate. I can remember doing just that many times....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Hi Fabian
I'm only saying what you already know - make the most of him while you can. They grow up far too quickly!!! Be well, Liz

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Also as with regards Gene's review, he will one day be smarter & know everything more than his dad...but hopefully it will only be a passing phase...;-) ed

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
This is nice, Fabian. But you know, eventually the day arrives when
the son is convince he's older than the father. -gene.

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Nice poem that I enjoyed reading. I find it touching and a bit emotional. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.

All the best,
Lena


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