i like the format of this, it reads easily and trips off the tongue. you create some memorable images and you said everything that had to be said without any extra verbiage! great job!
A WALK DOWN MEMORY LANE
I CAN FEEL THE HEAT OF SUMMER
TASTE THE LEMONADE
REMEMBER THE MOONNBEAMS
AND STLL CARRY THE TASTE OF HER KISS
THANKS GWEN .....EXCELLENT WRITE
Wonderful glimpses of summer; makes me nostalgic already. Most effectively created and expressed, Gwen. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.
Nostalgia! How sweet it is! Day Dreams is something of a Norman Rockwell painting. We all have a lemonade thirst of yesteryear. Thanks for keeping it alive, Gwen.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Abdi-Noor
I CAN FEEL THE HEAT OF SUMMER
TASTE THE LEMONADE
REMEMBER THE MOONNBEAMS
AND STLL CARRY THE TASTE OF HER KISS
THANKS GWEN .....EXCELLENT WRITE
Peace & Love .....William
Regis
An enjoyable composition of true poetic gratitude and beauty.
Healthy Happy Evening, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben_YEHU
Nice!!
Love Tinka
Sage
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