This is a lovely and powerful piece of work. And while I am not overly fond of all lower case presentations, in this case it works very well, giving a feel of a stream of thought. Powerful and good stuff here.
I know this emotional roller coaster well Gwen from walking on both sides of that fence. Most people don't realize how fine the line is between have and have not and how quickly they can fall. We should all have our hands out in love and sharing as you have suggested.
In a post-coup America, an Illinois farm boy is drawn into the resistance by his brother's death. Captured, he is given a choice: betray his friends, or the girl he loves will be lobotomized.
The Wholly Book of Exodus is humorous adult literature that features adult language, situations and content. It is the companion book of Jay Dubya's The Wholly Book of Genesis that satires the entire first book of the Bible.
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Splendid poem, thanks for sharing!
Love,
Eileen
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Love & Peace
William
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Beautifully comforting...if all we have to offer is our prayer or a compassionate hug, we've done our best. And you have here, in verse; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
"Today" sings wise fraternity for humanity in eternity of love "Today".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
God Bless,
Lew
utter words of comfort
hold feeble hands
And that is truly a marvelous thing to do, Gwen.
You are an Angel of Mercy and Consolation
The best thing we can give people is sincere love and hope
God Bless
Peter