"she exhales my essence,
as I inhale hers upon
times innocent breath"
Painted Passion of Soul
Alas,
the painted passion of my
soul
that from birth has raged
and waged war of long,
yes, the passion so raw,
that few knew her voice
she kissed me when
young,
promising me much,
and she sealed it with
a kiss planted in
tenderness
to few I have met,
on my journey alone,
who knew her hushed whisper,
or painted raged roar
for she cries like the wind
and yes, rages as the angry sea,
as she rakes my very heart daily
in brushstrokes harsh and brisk
she often and equally
touches me softly as well
as she braids the very sunset
of my soul with her breath,
and awakens once locked
and lost dreams
that once laid quiet within me,
on the bottom tablet of my soul
she walks and roams
without ceasing
traipsing about on the inside
walls of my heart
and she sleeps never,
as her fire never dims
yes, lighting my pathway
unto the threshold of my
dreams not yet touched
she enters uninvited,
unexpected as well
as she cast her mantle
about me
and bids me good journey
she stilts my soul
as she exhales my essence,
as I inhale hers upon
times innocent breath
she yes, remains mine,
as I remain hers
and in time shall we walk
till we each are
no more....
Rodney Evan Bohen
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Reviews of "Painted Passion of Soul"
Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
If you were to take the phrase; "He is a very moving writer" the your work would be the epitomy. It takes a brave soul to delve as deeply as you do and I thankyou for your courage.
Mal.
amazing, yes...powerful painting of you and the muse within...and oh, how beautifully written, as always from the heart and yes, the soul! bravo+
Reviewed by Deborah L. Kelly
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Rodney, this is absolutely and totally a stunning piece of literature. It moves one to the centre, the very essence of love and her passionate emotion. Outstanding, simply outstanding!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Nicely done, Rodney. From beginning to end it flows from one thought to another.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Mal.