yet you cant judge a
man
by hat worn, white or black,
nor by the horse
be it of small stature or tall
I Ride a White Horse
I have worn many hats,
ridden varied horses as
well, yet you cant judge a
man
by hat worn, white or black,
nor by the horse
be it of small stature or tall
for the nature of he
still remains
veiled to most all
though I ride tall in
the saddle
thus depicting surity
indeed
inside slumps a heart
that cries deeply
as seed
seed, yes sown
to the earth, with
each teardrop that
falls
sacrificed and offered
as fodder for
ground
my deposit of heart
can only remain what
it is
in the hopes that
that a brightness shall
radiate, from that shed,
a heart fallen
a mind broke
a frame compromised
indeed
as eyes fill
with tears,in
sad moments recalled
parading mass standing tall,
good moments
a rare few
whilst glaring
stark reality
siezes and steals
dim hope yet
unearthed.
I do ride a white
horse
Sitting mounted
and tall,
yet....
they percieve it as
a black horse
therefore my heart
not recieved at all,
I shall change not
my horse
as to entreat all
this day
as I did often in
past
yet the world
t'was still held at bay
I ride a white horse
for it paints my heart true ,
yet
they still see me in
dark hat
despite my heart say,
I console myself
however in this fact
alone
as my tears touch
to ground,
my horse knows his color,
and my heart
still untold.
Rodney Evan Bohen
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Reviews of "I Ride A White Horse"
Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Who can not relate? The colour of our own perception so rarely matches that of those we pray would see the "real" us. You are profound, articulate and wise, seannachie, a wisdom borne of a great heart and an open mind.
Mal.
"I Ride A White Horse" poemized with questions, search for identities to define the eternity of a moment in which one can search for his ==="I"=== and wander about his horse, his hat, and all his fantasy's tools; and the emotions of surety.
It was written with the ink of a searchful soul dropped from a heart that aspires knowledge and wisdom to establish an identity.
"I Ride A White Horse" is a Poem to strike thoughts and prod wisdom through intuition and imagination.
I Salute the Author of "I Ride A White Horse".
Andre Emmanuel Bnedavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Thoughful work. It's how one see themselves that works. Thee the 'doer'.
It's a deep meaningful poem. Creatively written with metaphors about life and how one can be perceived so differently by others. We are all masters of our white horses.
You have done wonders with this write. I love it! Love it!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
I love your poetry....It's so damn real and always leaves me thinking...Always write Rodney...tis your gift to us all.....Ty, Dani
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Mal.
It was written with the ink of a searchful soul dropped from a heart that aspires knowledge and wisdom to establish an identity.
"I Ride A White Horse" is a Poem to strike thoughts and prod wisdom through intuition and imagination.
I Salute the Author of "I Ride A White Horse".
Andre Emmanuel Bnedavi ben-YEHU
You have done wonders with this write. I love it! Love it!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$