My Clay (poem) by Rodney Evan Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

Elegant and very, very romantic evocation of sensuality and love.

Candy

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

dude you got some Fans in here and i see why, how'd you get by me all this time? huh
am mesmorized with the 'gentle will'
me thinks i could read you all night....

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

BREATLTAKING!
A Sigh, whisper and, as always a Touch of a Heart within...this 'clay', so unique a piece, such a human special, almost mystical quality, and so heart full...

As I knead my imprint of soul upon hers
She rakes her very essence upon mine
My clay, my blood
My very breath that sighs
My clay...

Just so moving...Rodney, Thank You, as always...

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

So beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words and expression...simply outstanding. Thank you so much for stopping by my page...it is a great compliment. :)

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

We knead our lives to meet our needs and bend love and fate where we can. The perfect metaphor, seannachie. Mal.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Wow, what a lovely piece of art you've sculpted here! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

a man an a woman are both clay!!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Rodney: Were you not a flesh and blood human being I believe you would be a wistful melody, composed by an angel. Your poem brought me into my love's arms and I had only to read to feel them close around me. Pure beauty.. real joy! I know you write from your heart.. and your heart is a stunner! Thank god you listen to it. katy.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Oh Rodney how beautifully you shaped and molded this astounding piece...a work of art by a true artist! :O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 3, 2003

I loved this one, so beautifully done,

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2003

Utterly gorgeous�I�ve been that clay in the hands of he�who see�s something new in me each day�and I in him�a sculpture of two is ultimately moulded to one�Arms drawn around arms�entwined so that souls may indeed kiss.

A very beautiful piece Rodney�

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2003

"...As I knead my imprint of soul upon hers
She rakes her very essence upon mine
My clay, my blood
My very breath that sighs
My clay,..."

Nice...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 3, 2003

This one sang to me of souls forming and reforming~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 3, 2003

a man an a woman are both clay, waiting to form each other...