Yea, I have tasted her
Yet not drank have I to full
Of her bounty and grace
I have but known small sips
From her goblet gilded in peace
Peace, yea, I danced with her once
Upon marble, where curtsey met bow
And calm swallowed tumult
We danced in sway once
When youth dawned upon our cheeks in adorned attire
I gazed her valley lush green and good
And drank of her bounty
Yea death withstood
I as one, likened unto the wild ass of the desert
Did both draw and inhale her scent
I yes have known princesses
Have embraced on court floors
Have danced many a dirt jig
With peasant lass as well
From regal to common, my joy teased
I melt now as the ice does
When spring doth arrive
Peace measured out carefully
Modicum indeed
A grain strained by a gnat my portion to keep
Feeble now my crown
Futile my beam
Tranquility, Yes I knew once
And still, do yes, hold her
Tightly in my grasp, weak and lean.
To measure her greatness in the palm of my hand
One would need to measure the universe
Carefully upon bended knee
To understand well, the wealth I possess
That I yea, do grasp taut, in my palm of hand
'Tis my life and quest
That I squeeze tightly
Small spec I'll grant yes!
Nevertheless, let me say, 'tis all I possess
No more shall I say.
so very, very beautiful...
oh, this has given me chills, in the best of ways, what a lovely, moving, stunning piece of human wonder, need/have/gain/loss/grasp all, a ...may you open the palm of your hand, whenever you can...
rodney,
this so gently moved me, thank you,
(((rodney)))
mich
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
I fell in love with the first line....I lived the rest.....Utterly beautiful fellow bard.. Truly...Ty, Dani
oooo *swoons*...thou doest toy with our emotions surely....how dare you make me feel so romantic and dreamy when I want to be all get up and go and paint that hall........I wont now and its your fault..
Just exquisite!
Again your words have captured this reader and lifted him to a place whether real or imagined that he has now seen with awe. I have sought praise for this and been found lacking in my ability to meet out the level that this deserves. Mal.
it may be all you possess, but it's everything...brilliant poem!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
Love it. Well done.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
You write with wisdom and strength.
~Joseph
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
WOW!
Rodney this is one awesome and captivating piece...love those last four verses best of all...what truth they speak, so my dearest friend always stand tall!
~Nikki~
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Candy
oh, this has given me chills, in the best of ways, what a lovely, moving, stunning piece of human wonder, need/have/gain/loss/grasp all, a ...may you open the palm of your hand, whenever you can...
rodney,
this so gently moved me, thank you,
(((rodney)))
mich
Beautiful,
Reindeer
Another beautiful write...
Trixie :)
Just exquisite!
~Joseph
Rodney this is one awesome and captivating piece...love those last four verses best of all...what truth they speak, so my dearest friend always stand tall!
~Nikki~