Standing naked, Hearts bared, Souls crying, out, Your hand in mine, My lips gently caressing yours, The setting wasn't much at all, Just a room, plain bare walls.
Please look for the rest of this poem along with others in my soon to be published book of poetry found online . www.lulu.com/dalehudgins. Thanks, Dale Hudgins.
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Reviews of "The Room"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Beautifully emotive and sensual.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Dale, and probably the ceiling spinning around? Seems like you know how to go with the flow. Bill Murray
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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