This is an amazin poem one of the best I have ever read, but alas I'm a blonde Bimbo so I do not fully understand the poem unlike some brunette wannabe's. But the poem is exellent. Well done! Charley
Reviewed by Jesus
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
This is really gd luv :) I like the line "Touch a star and scorch your skin, for beauty hurts much less within" - I think its really pretty
Charley,
This makes it official... you are a poet.
This is strong on every level, including one of the most important, the title. -Absolutely LOVE the title.
-James
Charlotte, wonderful poem. Life can surely become a rush.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
Charlotte.
"Touch a star and scorch your skin,
for beauty hurts much less within.
Touch an angel, catch a dream,
and watch your life drift off downstream."
this I have lived this is beautiful
Love the imagery
nice one to take along to work...
Peggy
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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This makes it official... you are a poet.
This is strong on every level, including one of the most important, the title. -Absolutely LOVE the title.
-James
"Touch a star and scorch your skin,
for beauty hurts much less within.
Touch an angel, catch a dream,
and watch your life drift off downstream."
this I have lived this is beautiful
Love the imagery
nice one to take along to work...
Peggy