We must all grieve as we must. Noone can hurry grief along. Each individual grieves differently and no set amount of time for grief. But it does rob you of much in life, and brings desolation to the dreams you once had in the way to live your life with that person. I do think you have expressed grief very well, but had to tell my points on it too. LOL Lois
Very well done poem, Patsy, glad I ran across this! You capture the tangle of emotions of grief perfectly!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
very descriptive for such hard subject to share, well done...Mark
Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2005
You are simply awesome. Thanks for this one!
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2005
Death of the physical body is birth of the Spiritual body.
well done.
I shall return to read more.
peace and life',
Rich Criso Suarez
Reviewed by Ernest Gwagwa (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Very sombre and illustrative of the mystery of death .It makes me realise the mortality of my body and how I should invest more in my spirit.The crispness of the poem and economy with words shows your mastery in choosing the right words to express yourself.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Death of the physical body is birth of the Spiritual body.
well done.
I shall return to read more.
peace and life',
Rich Criso Suarez
Arthur Ernest Gwagwa
Your words captured the true essence of grief. So very well written. A pleasure to find yur work and have the opportunity to read this today.
Sherry
Very well written.
JAMES L. DANIELS
Greetings.
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Jules :)